A fatastic story! The pairing is a new fetish of mine, but I love the way that you've captured the way that they toy with each other in the intricate game that they play so beautifully.

oh my god this is AMAZING. Please update! aww I feel so bad for kabuto it makes me want to cry...but happy bc this is HOT. more...? plz...

Awesome chapter. Kabuto's control/loss of control is beautiful.

I don't have time to log in, as I have actual work to do, but...Oh. Mah. Gawd. *dies* This was so freakin' fantastic! I love you so much right now. Totally made sitting my office all day worth it. XD XD XD

I've read this story in its entirety and I have liked it, but this chapter was awesome! I love the tension and twisted relationship between Orochimaru and Kabuto in this story. Keep up the good work.

"It was quite possible, Kabuto thought, that this was the first time the snake lord had tried to break someone who was already irreparably broken."
Awesome closing statement! Can't wait for more

That was SEXY! XD Thanks for the update btw ^^

XD loved it, i have to say. awesome ending, awesome beginning, and awesome middle, too. surprising setting, but hey, spontaneous *is* more exciting. ^^

Ah, who really does wear the pants in this relationship? XD Very sexy, and I loved it, as always.

This was an absolutely delicious look into Kabuto's thoughts during a vital scene in the story line. I loved the images in the anime of Kabuto crashing through that window and for you to give voice to his thoughts during that is truly a treat. Brava!

Nice!

I love how you've written this chapter! Its fantastic getting such an intimate look into Kabuto's thoughts, you've captured his character perfectly!

Wow, he really understands his master, doesn't he? :D

Loved it! x

great chap! can't wait for more!

^_^ Nice! Kakashi versus kabuto, from Kabuto's point of view. Different...very nicely done. Love the detail, and the looks into Kabuto's thoughts. Very nicely done!

BRAVO~!! OMG! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!! I toally had to remind myself, part way through, that I was reading a fanfic. You're just so freakin' amazing. I only wish I could be half as good as you are. *bows down and worships*

But I have to nip off; I'm...'working'. >> Can you tell?

nice...this chapter actually got their whole relationship really well. they kinda read into things a lot, don't they?
liked kab's appraisal of sasuke, as well. it's so hard to find anyone who actually criticizes him.
update soon!