I like this story its pretty good. I'll admit the whole Naruto not completing Rasenshuriken until he was 23 kinda bothered me. I'm also a little glad you didn't have Jiraiya killed off. Well anyhow good job on the wok hope you update soon. and yea

cute..

I cant wait to read more!

Great story write soon.

awsome story write more soon thank you. your rating is 10 out of 10 yea!