Ah impressive chapter again!!
Really love their characters
Great

Wow, this story was good! I definitely like how the end came about, for sure...

This is the first Skyland fanfic I have read, and I have to say this was a great start. I found the way you handled Diwan's amnesia logical, and interesting. Not over the top like some stories.

I hope to see other stories and captivating as this.

I'm impressed nice chapter!!
Can't wait for next!

ooh...this is getting so good! I really love this and the way it's going :)

I really love the story. That's all I can say.

I can't tell any critic an spelling or something cause I'm self not good in it ...
About the story well I like it and great te give Diwan her ''evil'' side back altough that's maybe gone to change again.
Anyway hope chapter 7 is up soon...

Hi :P
what's concrit?

The only thing I could find to criticise would be when the Seijin boy tells the pirates that he "tired" to tell the Sphere that he wasn't very good. :P
Other than that, it's just great :)

Amazing chapter!
Everything is getting to fit togheter... anyway can't wait till chap 6 Great!

Ooh, this is getting really good!

Amazing chapter again.!!
Suprising!
Ah poor cortes have to surender to Diwan ^^'

uh oh...
But it's incredible :)

Awsome chapter 2!!
Great how Cortes starts to doubt.
Anyway can't wait till chap 3

I like it. I'm actaully hoping that if and (hopefully) when they make a second season, or even the movie, that it will bring Di Wan back into it. Good job so far.

I loved it! and I'm hoping there is chapter 2 soon!
Great idea