 Siskin 2009-07-12 . chapter 1So... damn... cute. XD
The boys' interaction is priceless. The little details about their insane workday, the shop and the customers are as vivid as I could ask. The whole story made me feel as if I were right there, watching the boys (well, mostly Ken) hustle.
This is only about the third Weiss fic I've read, and I'm very glad I picked one of yours. I'll be back for more.
--Siskin |
 orthent 2009-02-15 . chapter 1 You wouldn't rant about my deficient review skills at FFR, would you, if all I could do was go "Aw!"?
This was an adorable, vividly imagined, hilarious slice of life--and seriously, with all the torture you love to put Ken through, I'm grateful that he had no worse to bear in this story than thirteen hours on his feet and some customer suckage. You've an eye for just the right details that bring the characters alive, for suggesting the stories behind the ordinary traffic of people in and out of the shop; you have this great understated humor, and yet when you draw the progress of Youji and Ken's relationship into it all, you make me almost cry. Poor Ken, as tigerish as he could be with Youji, in the end he asks so little. |