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SV0Productions
2009-11-05 . chapter 2
ha ha ha! i already loved the first one n i think its better now that its in stans pov. u wouldnt believe how many times i wanted to know wat was going on through stans mind in the first one. omj X]
Pachi
2009-10-31 . chapter 2
Horray! More for me to read! I love reading two sided things |D
I love it so far- and are you gonna take this down too if the original character version of "I Feel So" gets published?

*wants moar*
The-Icon-Girl
2009-10-27 . chapter 2
Dear god, this is amazing!
I really love this version so far, it's wonderful. ^_^
Mewtow
2009-10-17 . chapter 2
I just found the original of this yesterday and finished it and this story today. I really hope you continue it. You have an excellent writing style and the story is so awesome I want to read the different twist on it. :D I hope you update soon.

<3 Mewwie
LoveOfLiterature
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
This is really cute. I noticed it has been a while since you updated, but I will alert anyway. The original I Feel So was excellent as well. I believe I reviewed it as well.

Great work.
Numbuh 00
2009-08-11 . chapter 2
It's so cool to read this story from Stan's POV. Reading Kyle's POV made me think Stan only developed feelings for Kyle after Wendy broke up with him, but seeing it from Stan's perspective it gives so much more insight into the story. =)

I'm definitely gonna keep reading this. ;)

~ Anja
Norikumi
2009-08-05 . chapter 2
What the hell are you waiting for??!? Write another chapter!! D:

My god, I very rarely read stories twice, but I'm addicted to these. I ** love Stan's PoV so far.

plz moar :<
Genis Aurion
2009-07-26 . chapter 2
Hola. Not sure if you remember me, but it's been a while. I used to go by Zakuyoe, but that's hardly relevant to this review.

Anyway, out of curiosity (literally; as I finished a chapter to an original fic I was like "I wonder what she's been doing lately?") I stumbled on this and your profile. I may have reviewed the first one once upon a time, but I remember thinking then that I would've preferred IFS as a standalone project.

But you know, after reading this chapter (apparently I hadn't read it when the alert came to me the first time), I think I can change that point of view. I think it's because though the perspectives are the same, the stories are not. Like, I vaguely remember where it's going (bad memory for the fail), yet it's not boring or tiresome to read it in this perspective. Make sense?

From what I remember, I actually like Stan's perspective more than Kyle's. I'm not sure why, but there's a distinct difference in the way you're portraying them, and I like this one better. This being said, I admire your ability to personalize first person narratives, because that's still something I struggle with.

It's likely after I finish this review that I'll go back and read the first two chapters of IFS, because now I'm kinda curious as to how they were presented the first time. Following your update pattern so far (that is, it took your three months), hopefully we'll get an update in August? Maybe that's just wishful thinking.

I hope this review isn't too long for your liking (or too short). It's a lot shorter than my ones for IFS, but I think that's because this time around I don't have anything to predict, haha. Just letting you know that I'm supporting you on this one, as probably are a lot of other readers, and if you ever need anything I'm an email away.

Go go go!
- Genis Aurion
(or Zak, whichever you'd prefer)
watermelon.smiless
2009-07-05 . chapter 2
Wow XD I ** love your writing technique (if you'd call it that..). It's like all hot one second and then you write something that makes me die of laughter(: UPDATEE.
Gabberz720
2009-07-03 . chapter 2
dude, r u gonna continue this or what? this is really good so far! hurry up -_-
tsukiraven
2009-06-25 . chapter 2
This is absolutely stunning.
I was on a hunt for some good South Park slashfics, since I've only just gotten into the pairing, and I found "I Feel So" about a week ago. I read it, and was INCREDIBLY amazed by what you were able to produce- so imagine my joy when I found Stan's version! =D
This story is flawless so far, and a perfect companion to the original piece. I sincerely hope you're going to finish this, because I know that myself and your legions of fans will all be chomping at the bit to see the next update.
Even though I know what happens, the original story is so good that I definitely don't mind reading it again. And it'll be REALLY SUPER AWESOME to read everything from Stanley's POV.
Can't wait for that next chapter. ;] You're doing marvelous so far!
momijikk
2009-06-15 . chapter 2
Oh my gosh, this series is so epic win and everything. The way it's written, the plot line (yes I read the first one!), and the description...The power behind each word, phrase, paragraph...

...I am in love with this fic. It's true.
(That, and the Stan strip dancing was pretty great. I can't wait to see what Stan was thinking the entire time in this one! X3)

That being said; update soon, please? : D? I'm sure there's more than one person eagerly awaiting your updates, because this story was just that amazing. ^-^

-MomijiKK
Pretty-Riot
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
Ah! Just found this, Please continue! -begs- I loved the original story, and I could die happy
if you finished this! :D


-faints- Awesomeness.. :)
iluvkenny
2009-06-01 . chapter 2
I really love how the title of the chapter fit into that one xD
Reading this in Stan's POV is so awesome~ I love the way you write him ^^
Please, don't ever discontinue this! D:
Don'tKillKenny
2009-05-30 . chapter 2
oh my goodness, this is amazing! please update soon!
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