 Lita Kino1 7/28/02 . chapter 3so whats going to happen? is utena going to kill akio and have anthy as her hore? utena's going to b a pimp? im taking guesses here. um...is akio gonna get horny and order anthy to have sex with utena? hmmm...ok ok, is utena gonna find out that akio's not her prince and kill him, becoming the ultimate pimp and having anthy as her hore? hmmmm...where's juri? u should have her in leather with wips and chains..oo! oo! and she is the leader of the mafia group thing and-and have her meet shiru (the girl she loves in the anime) in a night club and drug her.. when shiru wakes up shell find herself strapped to a bed and naked to see juri above her with a whip...just an opinion...i like ur story so far but why is wakaba the star here? she is usually a flat character...but u probly like her so dats kewl...umm..lets see...wheres toga in this? i know he must be like one of the main pimps..oo! u should have him go to the kitchen and find utena there and at first sight of her, he wants to bang her so he trys to flirt with her but utena tells him to fuck off and then he trys to conversate and finds about this prince crap so he gets an idea and lies to her saying "u know, i can get u to see akio.." then utena says "really?" toga:yeah, but of course i was always a man with an eye for a bargan. Utena: What? what are u talking about? Toga: well u cant get something for nothing u know... utena: what do u want? "I think u know what i want.." toga gets close to utena and trys to kiss her. utena then got the message and slaps him across the face saying "You playboy!(sound formiliar?) then toga says "well i guess u wont be able to see ur prince .." as toga turns to leave, utena looks down with second thoughts and then says "Wait!"Yes?" toga looks to utena with a grin. "If i do this, ull let me see my prince? ull bring me to him ?" utena asks with doubt. "of course" toga goes up to utena and grabs her but with both his hands "you have my word.." then they do it on the kitchen counter. uh..sorry, i guess i got carried away...im not trying to write ur story, i just reall y want to know how ur going to continue it...my friend is laughing 'cause im writing so much to u...hey, i never had a computer and still dont and i love anime...oh and uhh well ur review, pretty kewl...oo! what about nanami? she should still have mitsuru around as her little sex slave, for example when she needs some one to eat her, she snaps her fingers and says "Mitsuru!" lol...oh! and after himemiya (anthy) and utena do it in front of akio, after that day anthy gets completely obsessed with utena and is completely sex crased for her bcuz hey, utena is that damn good! heh-heh well sorry if this essay is bothering u, im bored and a loser...what can u do? im so-o curius to find out what u wrote after what ive read...but u are so right to do that, i mean, in the anime/comic and movie, anthy was pretty much a hooker already, keep writing, i love it! sorry for keeping u long , im going , dis is himemiya/galaxia . if u wanna chat , well i mean, reach me , my email address is ...bye-bye! girly! keep it up... |