WHOA! I love it! Ur really good! keep it up! :P

aww that was soo sweet

This is really good! Keep up good work

i love this it was so sweet. and i could imagin ian saying this.

A couple things confused me here and there - firstly, the third line is worded a bit weirdly - maybe lose the contraction - secondly, near the end, I don't see the connection between 'concern' and 'shiny hair' like I do in all the other lines, and thirdly, I think that "I SPEAK no lies" would make more sense than "I SAY no lies". Besides, those few things, however, I thought it was very nice. I really liked the play on the word soul near the middle, and my absolute favorite line was probably "Because of the silver I love the eyes"... maybe because that's what most humans would hate? Anyway, I was also impressed with the last two lines, because those are often hard to get to rhyme and not sound cheesy. Overall, nice job.

I love your poem!! It's so beautiful! You're so good at poetry!

Awesome, I love it :] I could never write a sonnet XD

aww.. a really heart warming sonnet.

:)

That's really great. I could never write a sonnet. I have trouble with poems. But this was done really well. And I've always liked the Host better than Twilight so I'm happy you decided to write for it.

aww this was cute!