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NonConformingAngel
2009-10-27 . chapter 6
lol, that was awesome!
i can't wait for Ino and Naruto's date!
I wonder who Ino wants to make jealous.
Shikamaru? : )
I love how even though it's NarutoxEveryone, it's predominantly NarutoxSasuke : )
XD I'm loving this!
-NonConformingAngel
Twisteddarkness225
2009-09-21 . chapter 6
interesting story, i can't wait to see Naruto and Ino's date. Please update soon.
obsessivesyndrome
2009-08-17 . chapter 6
LOL. Go Sai! I like how your writing styles are so versatile. There is a sharp contrast between the style for "Something around midnight" and this fic; I like that a lot:) This fic is funny and heartwarming. I really enjoyed reading it :D Can't wait for the next update :)
Mystik Genie
2009-08-13 . chapter 6
Naru as an uke? yeah that would never happen...not, we all know he's submissive to Sasu *giggle*
mylittledarksecretaddiction
2009-08-11 . chapter 6
wah!
Karma Kat 281
2009-08-10 . chapter 6
HAHAHAHAHAHA! I love Sai! and Ino! Poor Naruto, hahahaha.
Let The Flames Begin My Heart
2009-08-03 . chapter 6
This story makes me feel better about myself everytime i read a new chapter. It a beautiful story. though i do have to wonder if this will be a sasu/naru? Kind of the theme you have going in chapter 5.
flimsysky
2009-08-01 . chapter 6
I couldn't stop grinning even after reading this chapter for the third time XD I love it!! ...Especially the unexpected appearance of Sasuke in the painting... with Naruto... *holds tissue against nose* XD ho dear

Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter =)
IntertwinedxDestinies
2009-07-31 . chapter 6
Wow, you went to Otakon too? I wish I could have spotted you there (although, sorting through 27,0 people might have been difficult...).

Glad to see you're slowly getting out of your "semi-hiatus." I always look forward to reading your stories. Thanks for updating!

-IntertwinedxDestinies
SandyJ62
2009-07-29 . chapter 6
Was not expecting Sai. The way you described him I thought it could be Sasuke, but of course it's way too early for him to show up. Enjoyed their "date". The way Sai kept coming on to Naruto, it was cute and funny. Even funnier was Naruto's reaction. Oh Naruto, you do protest too much. Sasuke better come back soon, I think he has some competition.

I like the way you wrote Sai. He still does not entirely understand about bonds and is surpised when Naruto expresses concern for his well being. Sai confused me here. He seemed kind of distant yet didn't he want to spend time with Naruto?

My fav Sai line: [“You’ll come to terms with it at some point,” Sai said and gave his arm a stiff pat.] Very interesting. Was this Sai's purpose? To get Naruto to come to terms with himself? When Naruto finally looked at his portrait? What else could it have been? Even Sai is a SasuNaru fan! Would love to see fanart for this chapter!

I like your Ino, evil and conniving! [My fav Ino lines: “Well, if you’re not gonna keep it,” she said, bending forward and pointing a manicured finger in Naruto’s face. She smiled coyly, “Do you mind if I keep it?”] Hysterically funny. Of course she's going to tell Sakura! This next date looks very interesting. I can't wait to see what Ino has planned.

As for the portrait? Hee hee hee. No way is Naruto going to burn it. That would be rude, especially since Sai went through all that effort. When did Sai get to see Sasuke nude?

Looking forward to your next update! The story concept here is unique and very interesting. It is a nice vehicle for Naruto's growth and character development. I think Naruto really does need a reminder of all the people he has in his life. Of course I'm not suggesting he give up on Sasuke. He just needs some perspective.

This would actually work in either the manga or the anime. Would love to see this as a story arc in the anime. I think we could use some lightheartedness.
counter-intuitive
2009-07-28 . chapter 6
Muaha ha ha ha. Loved the last line xD And I agree with you about the Naruto Shippuden movie! I love all Naruto's expressions xD and when he did that hair thing! I was like... woah... anime character here, he's not real >.< Erhm... yeah anyway... :D
counter-intuitive
2009-07-28 . chapter 5
Aw! I could deal with NaruHina if it went canon... *looks around guiltily* I love SasuNaru n' all but Sasuke's being a massive jerk atm *sigh* Really good idea for a story though! I'm enjoying it a lot :)
Hot4Sas
2009-07-28 . chapter 6
I feel that it’s been so long :D
I was on winter holidays. I couldn’t help myself from reading LIT, OoMH and SAM all over again :x (the latter like, three times?)

“Sai looked at Naruto as if he’d henged into Sakura-chan during her time of the month.”…
xD
GOD o_o

“Hmm. Where would you like me?” He grinned suggestively.”…
What the hell? xD

“Naruto sighed and then breathed in deeply, feeling an ache in his chest and wondering at what point would he no longer be overwhelmed by the sting of that loss. Not that he’d ever forget, and not that he wanted to. Sometimes he thought he never wanted it to disappear so long as he could remember.”…

Okay, I took this part rather seriously and personally (and when not? xD). Yes, it is like that. You just wrote a bit about Jiraiya’s death, but it amazes me how you can describe *that* feeling so well (when you lose someone). I’m NOT underestimating you at all. I’m just pointing out what reminds me.. Why I can’t get bored/tired of you. Makes me wonder if you’ve lost someone, too. Or if you can see from other people’s eyes that well.

About the chapter, since that’s what reviews are about.. I loved it. Sai was.. nice. And perceptive. Naruto can be excessively oblivious about some things.. So it’s cool that he has a friend like Sai. And I’m cool with Ino. Sounds to me that they’ll have fun. :B

GreatGreat <3
AkatSaku
2009-07-28 . chapter 6
Haha. This is just too great. :D

Keep writing, this is great! Love how Sai is a huge perverted yaoi fan in secret. Though, his obsession with 'thingys', in particular Naruto's, should have given it away long time ago. Typical yaoi fanartist, in other words. (I want to see that drawing, though.)
sakurananachan
2009-07-28 . chapter 6
Wow! I did not see that one coming!! I absolutely expected the Naruto naked part, but Sasuke hehehe
i love how Sai seems to bring them even closer in the manga, even if he doesn't really mean to or actually doesn't seems like he wants to, but he ends up getting that result at the end...
Even if I do wanna think of them as a couple, as in Smexy Sex with each other, the fact is I do think they are meant to be complimentary of each other and I don't mean in asexual way, but in a human to human kind of way... you know?
Well, I have always loved how you manage to portray Naruto and Sasuke so well, make me feel as if I actually know them and as if they could be real people, the neighbor next door, the person sitting next to me on the bus...
Anyways, thanks for updating! You are awesome!!
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