your story mad me cry, and trust me when I say it isn't very easy to do, especially on fanfics. Not any people write stories as emotional or well written as yours. It was beautiful, the simplicity of it all.

-Vine

I'm crying. I would be crying no matter what characters or what anime this story used because of the emotion of it. Especially the end. This story showed highlights of a life between a good man and a good woman who raised a good family and touched lives with other good people. Just like my grandfather. And just like him, he went too soon and faded slowly. It was the hardest thing I ever had to watch in my entire life. We are a small, back country family but you wouldn't have known it from his funeral. Almost 1,0 people showed up to offer condolences and thanks that my grandfather was a part of thier lives. It's been 2 years. I miss him dearly. Every day a little of the pain slips away to allow me to remember the joy of the time I did have with him. As I read this story I felt a lot of the pain wash away at once. I wanted to thank you for that. No one and nothing has helped me as much as this story has. Writing, living, nothing. I can't thank you enough.

That was beautiful. I cried! ='[

Another old story to catch up on. I hope adding more reviews gets more people to read your work on here, because it's just awesomeness. I always really liked the part about vanilla ice cream, myself. :D

I can hardly describe how amazing and beautiful this story is. It showed me a new perspective on life and death beyond my years that many other works have tried to convey and not met with as much success as your work has. Top marks. :D

good fic verry godo * wipes a tear form eye* bravo ive seen ure work some whear before verry good to see soem 1 who can keep akane in char so hard to find that braveo 10/10 normlay i dont like a sad end but this was good

Absolutely beautiful. It was touching, sad and in some odd way it left me feeling happy. Death is the next step in this battle of life but when it hits close to home one manages to just question the gods, the heavens, why him or her ... why always me. But the people that are leaving this world just accept that their time comes and its ok. I was in a terrible place when my grandma passed away but after I thought about it, I realized that her time here ended but her spirit lives on in my mom's smile, my sister's cunning mind and my belief that time heals all wounds ... even the ones that seem will never mend.

Thanks for a story about love, life and death that is not the ending of love ... it's just the next step that we all are going to take. And hopefully one day I'll find my Ranma (cause I am most definitely an Akane lol) .. that not even death can separate him from me ... just give me more proof of his love ... like all love ... it's transcendent.

this was absolutely lovely, i can't think of anything else to say, , it was just completely and totally lovely and almost makes tears come to my eyes
well done

Lovely! Very touching, very well done!

A-a real t-t-tear jerker. You wrote it beautilly.

That was great. If that was consider 'good' i can't wait to see your best work.

Amazing story! It was really touching, wonderfully written and conveyed, in my opinion at least.

Congratulations.

Simply amazing. Beautifully written piece. Nothing to add.


Keep up the good work

Lord Lore

Oh yes... No Dominion was always one of those stories that made me actually cry after reading it. I don't typically enjoy tragedy, but this is excellently written. It's good to finally see it here, after all this time.

I cried after reading this. Thank you.