this was the most f**ked up Alex Rider story I ever read...and yet my mouse hovering over the Favorites button O_O

That was...SO freaky! But really good at the same time.
Clever in the way it was written.
But eww and freaky haha.

That was so completely psycho and gut-wrenchingly sad/fucked up/angsty. Wonderful. u_u I really like how you wrote the point of view, kind of confusing, shifting around, perfectly following the whole mood and subject of this short story. Great piece of work.

SO sad

Well the time I was supposed to use updating my stories, I "wasted" *note sarcasm* reading your fics.
God, if it wasn't so late (or early depending on where you put 4 am.) I would read so much more.

Like the other stories from you, this was amazing.
I really loved it.
Hm, I don't care that is was dark, or that it was Jack/Alex. I like dark and I love unconventional lmfao

-Kay

Okay, well, um, wow, was that fucked up or what? the thing is, it was really good, and REALLY well written. I understood it perfectly,(kay, maybe im lyin' there) but still, dark isnt even close. well, you keep doin what you do.

With love, or something close to it, TheDevimangel

Nicely written, i don't think I've seen anything like this before. There aren't that many fics like this from Jack's perspective. Keep on writing!

Hm, I liked how you used second person and pulled it off perfectly. Bravo.
And the incest thing? Oh well,we're all at least a *little* fucked up in the head. There's worse than that.
I do think Jack was a little OOC, but I guess that comes with the material. After all, how do you manage to make someone in character while completely out of character? (I know, I don't understand what the hell I wrote either. :P)
I love your stories- so intense always. Well done.

-Lily

Huh. Not too big on Jack as a character (anywhere), but I absolutely LOVE the head drama going on in this! Loved it!

Yeah, you're really fucked in the head. That's not necessarily a bad thing, though. :D

Okay... this was completely fucked up. And that's why I liked it. ^_^; It was awesome. Nice job. The ending was just...

Yeah. I liked it. Yup.

... I'll just shut up now.

Jack/Alex? Okay... I can handle near incest.

Of course, I also adore Wincest (Supernatural, that is) so I guess I read incest anyway? And I read a few twincest stories over on FP, so... Yeah. Near incest doesn't bother me at all. lol.

Okay, so... wow. That was /really/ dark. And really, really too good!

Actually, too good for something so disturbing. What was that for? What did they ever do to you?!

lol. No, I'm glad you wrote it. But you really are full of weird pairings, now, aren't you? ^_^

I wondered when someone would do this pairing. didn`t think it would be dark but still.
well doe that was awesome