this needs an ending! great story!

What's this? Lisa's dead!? How could you!?

Argh...bring in next update ASAP!

wow what a chapter. WEll Rick has seen his feelings for Lisa, Please Let her come back. It would be nice. great writing...

Another great and heart renching story. Who was the woman that Rick saw at the bar.

Wow now that is what I call a powerfull ending. Please dont kill Lisa. Please update soon. REALLY want to see how this story plays out.

How could you do that to Lisa? Why are you punishing Rick? Just kidding... Wow! The title of the chapter befits the contents... I like your style... and I love the story... Keep it up... I'm one of your loyal fans!

Hmm, seems that they were attacked before they even left the atmosphere, or am I missing something here. So was that the plan, kill a ranking RDF officer, or is there something more to it. If this was a plan of Khyron's, or the malcontents, you would think there would be alot more to it than just that.

why kill lisa? you put a twist on it. know we got to see what going to happen. okay i will what and see.

Well a lot of twist...did you really kill Lisa? Can't wait for the nextchapter. Please don't get rid of her.

Very intense ending! Though we all know she isn't dead ;). I hope we get to see a heroic rescue!

HI!. OK I´LL BE ALERT ABOUT THE VOTE.
ABOUT YOUR SPANISH, IT´S MOCH BETTER THAN MY ENGLISH ^_^, BUT WELL, WE UNDERSTAND EACH OTHER, RIGHT?.

OMG!, WHAT WAS THAT IN THE END OF THE CHAPTER, A DREAM?. NOW I´LL BE EATING MY NAILS TILL YOU UPDATE, SO HURRY PLEASE.

SALUDOS!

Hm what is the plan of Julstran? I'm sure he cannont be trusted? Well, updates please since it's very intriguing.

Just as I was replying to your review... you we're already updating your story. Great! Thanks for updating you story... more updates please...

HOLA, DE NADA, DIME, HAN TERMINADO YA LAS VOTACIONES?, HE ENTRADO A LA PAGINA PERO NO HE PODIDO VOTAR POR TU FIC.
ME ENCANTÓ ESTE CAPITULO Y ME MUERO DE GANAS DE SABER, CUAL ES EL PLAN.
SALUDOS.

READ YOU SOON.

Loved it and awaiting for the updates...congrats