Psst...there is a typo during the part where Helen was checking Nikola for injuries, you wrote "collar bond" when I think you meant "bone" and than "pocket" about seven paragraph after that. I didn't understand the "sick with blood" part when you were writing from John's perspective...thick with blood? And are the words switched around in the sentence "God, is that the hour?” ,along with a slight typo? And about Nikola's coat being long enough to "bury".

Aside from that- another exciting chapter! These typo catches means I am reading every single word, enthralled in every scene. ^_^ (But seriously, say the word when it becomes annoying and I will stop.) I caught that tiny part about "His sister's notes" too, and it seems another character connection has been made. Hehe, I do love it when authors leave bread crumbs like those. I wonder what part she shall play. That was a sweet moment when Nikola noticed Helen sleeping in the coach amidst their countless woes. Now we learn what Gregory has been up to all this time off screen so to speak. Gosh it is so ironic that James should ask John of all people to help him. The plot is beginning to unfold. I hope you post another chapter soon because the way this chapter ended almost borders on cruel ^_~ Although you get many points for incorporating Nikola's medication into your storyline.

Things are getting more intresting and exiting by the chapter and I love it. Like the fact that John's insanity is starting to catch up with his consious mind and I hope James will be able to figure out what is really going on and that they can soon rescue Nigel. I was suspisious that Helen's father stole the notes and I like the fact he is trying to "cure" Helen for it makes a good touch. Glad to se Nikola is ok and they have in way started to devolpe a medication for him. I wonder when he will be able to actually control his transformations because the Five are going to nned every advantage against the Cabal. Once again great work and I look forward with great exitement to your next chapter.

I've enjoyed this story tremendously. While I would much prefer a quick flow of the stories, for such high standard of creativity and writing, I'm ok with waiting.

Oh yes, new chapter!
I'm very intrigued by whats going on with Helen and her father's search having something to do with Nikola's family. That whole bit has me very curious.

Also loving the way John is going insane, and how Watson is suspecting Nigel...

Awesome chapter, leaves me hungry for more!

Hehe, so this is why you wanted that research? I like. I'm intrigued to find out where you'll take it next. <3

Oh...Poor whumped Nikola! I'm slowly making my way through the back sections now, but I am caught up on the current stuff. I am so reading this out of order, but MORE! Soon please! :-D

Oh, MAN!! I love this story!! My favorite part of Sanctuary is the history with Helen, Druitt, Tesla, etc. This story is fascinating and a perfect backstory for The Five. I can't wait for more!

Hello and HAPPY HALLOWEEN to you from big fan! Just writing to wish you a good Halloween before I go for my own Halloween celebrations. I recently aquired the Sanctuary Box set and it is brilliant and this current season is brilliant aswell. Also Im still waiting paitiently for the next update to this brilliant story and I hope they will be able to save Nigel and James will be able to figure out the murder's true identity. Hope Nikola wakes up in the next chapter too, espesially after he alowed his vampire side to take over in order to protect Helen when he's been fighting it for so long. The big hero:)

Anyone coongrads again on a great story and I hope you update soon!

We *Heart* you too! I especially adore how you describe Nikola's personality. The man can be quite expressive when he wants to be and he just exudes refinement. And who knew he could be so selfless? Please write more soon.

Yup, this is a repeat because I wanted to be logged in. Not to waste review space, I shall write more. It is very realistic that James suspect Nigel. Although Gregory's appearance seems to be oh so coincidental, it was about damn time he showed up again. He is kind of a neglectful father, no? I wonder if Sherlock will get involved with The Five or else James will be wandering off. I am sure the next chapter will be another inventive plot development. You cheeky Monkey. ^_~ I shall be anxiously waiting.

We *Heart* you too! I especially adore how you describe Nikola's personality. The man can be quite expressive when he wants to be and he just exudes refinement. And who knew he could be so selfless? Please write more soon.

Why aren't they hunting John too? Great predicament you have set up for Nikola and Helen. It warms my heart to see how protective he is of her.

Have I mention I am addicted to this story? Oh, so very much so. What an unexpected surprise! Nigel gets to play the Hero. I like the connection you made between Nigel and Helen. What a tangle web we weave.

Clever use of Nigel's ability in this chapter and extra points for the plot twist at the end. Sure didn't see that coming.

Psst..I found two typos. First one is in the last sentence from Nigel's perspective. "Deer". Second one can be found in John's first paragraph. "Fetal." Other than that, I am glad things seem to be taking a turn for the better. *Cough* You know, besides Jack the Ripper is emerging. Is it so terrible that I only care about Nikola's condition? Regular sarcastic Tesla entertains me so much more than deranged pained Tesla.

What a mad mad world when solving murder mysteries kept a man sane. Nigel really isn't all that bright, is he? I guess he is concern for his friend, but honestly...not that smart to move towards impending doom. The plot thickens.