Aw... That was so cute. I loved it. Gave me an idea for valentines day for sure. (if u dont mind of course) :)

This is a cute little story. The kisses idea was really sweet.

i liked it are u sure its ur 1st itanaru lol

Pass - to move by or around something.
Past - something that has already happened; past tense.

Of course, as I'm sure you already know, there are alternative uses for these terms, but keep the definitions in mind and try to separate them correctly and use the one that fits what you're trying to say. I also noticed that you have a little trouble with tenses - using past and present tense in the same paragraph in some places; you might want to keep an eye out for that in the future.

Similarly, keep an eye out for punctuation, and use a spell checker frequently throughout writing. (Get a beta if you feel uncomfortable with checking over your own work, or are incapable of doing so yourself.)

Haha, I'm really glad that you use a disclaimer - lots of people have stopped using them, or just don't use one in the first place. Getting sued, as I would imagine, isn't fun.

Otherwise, it was a cute fic. I liked the idea behind it - it kind of reminded me of the Twelve Days of Christmas idea, but it was very sweet.

Anyways, thanks for the read!

- Requisite

that was really cute...i liked it!

*fangirl scream!*
I loved it
thank you
it was so sweet and cute..

omg soo cute!! i actually didn't ever think of this pairing before

AWWH! that was so adorable!! so cuute!~

hi...this is one of the sweetest ItaNaru fic ... you are great :)

Aw, so cute!! I loved it!

I really liked this

I like the story!~

Kiba's note made me laugh out loud!
He sure knows how to speak his heart out =]

AW! SO FREAKING CUTE! I thought it was SasuNaru, but it was a pleasant surprise!

I really loved it! Poor Naruto.