... Bella is a bitch. Yeah, I knew it since the start! xD aw, but she was so nice with Natalie.. well, I think the devilish never dies xD, Aw, I Can't believe I already finished this part of the series, IN ONE DAY .. man, that was so adictive xD
Well, there's nothing more to say besides.. YOU ARE ONE OF THE gratest AUTORS I've ever read xD, definitely, you're in my top 5 ;D, well, I'd better start to read Legends of the Blood Moon: A New Era... xD read ya l8tr!

I was reading this in class when the professor was lecturing- I had to laughed out loud during the part when Edward FOUND Jacob, ahem, and I was pretty sure I had this crazy grin on my face that I couldn't get rid of just in time lol, I am glad I am not in high school anymore~ still couldn't stop laughing (not that your sex scenes are funny, in fact they are down right hawd! ahem)

I actually do love Jacob in his long hair glory, there's this one pic that I totally love about him in long hair! anyhow, back to reading, you are amazing.

Lepingy

Just got to the end of this chapter and noticed your said:“SORRY FOR THE BAD CHAPTER"

Bad chapter? hardly! I actually LIKE reading the interaction between Jacob and Roselie in this chapter, it was quite adorable and entertaining lol (love how Edward had to beg Rosalie to take Jacob away hehehe)

anyhow, I am slowly trutting toward the next chapter, I want to be able to read the new story soon, ttyl!

Lepingy

(I have never read any twilight book/or watch the movie, but I am definately becoming a serious Jakeward fan!)

wo, one thing I love about catching on LATER than everyone else is that THERE ARE TONS of fics COMPLETE and to be read ^_~ I started on Crimson Moon, love imprinting, and so far by chapter one I am loving it lol. Natalie is so cute! I wonder how Bella is gonna take it? wo next chapter!

Lepingy

EMMETT?! WTF? haha well i defintely wasn't expecting that

What time period is this? I thought it was after New Moon but.. James is still alive! Confusing...

The way you write this pairing is extremely plausible, and extremely slow. They're both wonderful things to have in a story, especially the former. You have taken what is somewhat of a cliched storyline and added in a twist that I simply adore. Thank you so much for writing this - you've entertained me for a long time. ^^

I've spent the last three days reading this story, taking in chapters when I could even sneaking and staying up late, lol.

I'm amazed that its built up to such length, the ups and down that Jacob and Edward have gone through at times left me in shock, anger or general OMG no they didn't. The odd relationships that have built up around them I can actually see happening. In short, I loved every moment of it.

I've got wet eyes here reading that last part though. You really know how to weave a good story.

love it

I can't even finish reading this. And its a shame because the plot is good but its pretty much a really shitty rewrite of the Twilight series with a few tweaks here and there. Like with Victoria and James... Instead of a camcorder you use a camera and you are even daft enough to put that in your story in the dialogue. Its like you didn't even pay attention to details from the books about their homes and whatnot. Not to mention, you don't even keep them in character.

You are pretty much writing stuff as badly as preteens write their stories and make their stupid quizzes with the simplicity of the characters core attitude. And then, like I said in a previous review, you obviously don't know the difference between past and present tense.

Your writing is crap. You may be 20, but you write like a 12 year old. And for your information, that makes you a douchebag when you point out you aren't one. I have a mouthful more to say about how horrible your story is so far, but I don't feel like having to go back and reread to show you what I mean.

Ugh, if it weren't for the fact I actually want to see how this ends, I'd have stopped reading the first second I saw you don't know the difference between past and present tense. I am going to hit the submit feedback/review button. That's present tense. I had hit the submit feedback/review button. That's past tense. Its driving me crazier than the book 'The Road' and how he doesn't use his punctuation to mark things clearly.

-Ace

Sheshe before I go any further, you have to know I love you. *breathes as best she can*

You shit. OMG I cannot stop crying! I am already all pluged up from being sick and know this! CRAP! Esme!? Bella!? Edward leaving?! MAN OH MAN! *sighs*

Okay I'm done now. By the way I totally did not see that coming at all. I loved this part of the saga:) Very awesome, I have always loved first time stories. God I only hope Jake is going to be okay. I am heading off to bed, I need sleep and drugs. Love you, nighters!

*HUGS*

Okay that vanilla thing is bugging me, it's his pheromones right?

You did it, you made me like Leah a lot. I always had a grudging acceptance of her like Jake does in the books, but now what she's doing for Jake. *nods* Yep I love your version. :D

I think I need another shower:) *blushes* That was h-o-t.

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HOLY RUSTED METAL BATGIRL!

OMG! EMMETT! LOL! Sorry I am al excited! *giggles* I wish I could have been a fly on the while when they had that conversation. I would have loved to see everyone's face's when Bella told everyone Emmett put a bun in her oven! *snorts* BWAHAHAHA! I love the Rachel Victor thing, VERY cool!