Such a beautiful story :) I loved it very much

awwwwwwwwwwwww. It was adorable. (:

*sniff sniff* Oh My God! *sniff rubbs eyes... so swet and so sad!

amazing job!

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ohh.. this is so sweet! the end is a little sad, but still, great!

That was so sad but very beautiful. Nicely done. I almost shed a tear. Thanks for posting it. :D

aw! that's so sweet! i was sad to hear about christopher and edward but i did love the sweet parts. -best wishes cjc

Thats a cute story but it is a sad ending but it does fit...

No offence, but in the beginning, I thought it was a little stupid. but then as I kept reading, it got better, much better. I loved the ending even though it was sad. You are a really good writer. N.

this was beautiful.!

full of emotion, i loved the way it went throught there life together and the ending was just what would of happend if edward was human, it did make me cry u admit lol

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Fantastic!

keep up the writing!

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Oh my gosh.

I have never ever actually read one of the actual stories that made me cry at the end, and when I was about half way through I started tearing up. When I got to the actual end, I started bawling my eyes out. It was so beautiful and amazing and I feel like a lovesick sap.

Oh well.

This was wonderful!

that was so good but one of the saddest things ive ever read :(

That was really, really good! The ending was sad, but expected.

aw!

I loved it! the ending put it all together i love how it ended. you should continue with this.

Aw! That was so cute! The only thing I protest, is that we didn't get to know more about Allie and Lizzy. Oh well.