Your story was absolutely amazing. i really love it very much, but I'm sad that it had to end. i hope i can see more of your work in the future

Jo Navark, you are a credit to writers everywhere.

I myself have been writing for five years and been reading for longer, and never, in all that time, have I read something that I enjoyed quite as much as your story--except maybe the Harry Potter books...lol!

Joking aside, your work is utterly beautiful and displays a great deal of talent.

I'm sure that many reviewers have begged you for a sequel. I am not going to beg; I am simply going to request that you continue Jo's--or technically Xander's--adventure toward becoming a Master of Kung Fu.

Judging by your story, you put a lot of love into the words you write, and I firmly believe that if you love something you do, you should NEVER stop doing it and NEVER let anything get in your way.

Have faith in your imagination, Jo. It has great power. Use it well and wisely. Let it guide your hands and mind as you write, and combine it with your heart to give your words strength.

That, I believe, is the best advice a writer, and a dreamer, can give another.

Always a fan,

Jon, AKA Kivu.

P.S. if you ever want to read any of my work, let me know. Do it in the review box, as I'm not logged onto this site. (none of my work really qualifies as fanfiction).

This is the best story I have ever seen, you are definetly the man! So what's next?

That was awesome! Are you doing more? Great fic! Wish it was longer.

--A.U. '05

Wow. Where's Jo going? Have to find out next! Check out my latest fic, "Skywalker's Climb." It's really awesome!

--A.U. '05

Bravo! Awesome story! I love little Jo! Please tell me you'll do more!

OMFG that was awesome you must write some more.To me the only porblem was a few typos but only a few

Awesome! I can't wait to see more chapters in this fic! Please post some more!

--A.U. '05

I love it. Keep it up!

This fic is awsome, usually i don't like OC's but you really made it work with Lo, and i lovved the friendship between him and Po.

Yay! Po's back! Update soon!

PO'S ALIVE! YAY! lol Very impressive chapter! I liked how you drew out Tai's cocky attitude and kept Jo from going into some corny monologue! Thanks for updating!

WHAT TOOK YA SO LONG?! It was awesome! I loved it a lot. Please do more chapters! Happy halloween, dude!

--A.U. '05

He's ALIVE! Way to go man!

Oh darn. Maybe I should have stayed tuned in this whole time so that I would have cried more when I thought that was really the end...
PO IS DEAD?! I'm not gonna flame you, but that's so depressing! Poor Jo! I mean the way you described it, gosh... I would be crying if I were him! I wouldn't wanna go back to my old lifestyle, never! And Master Shifu and the five would still never want to see him again, and everything would just be... UGH.
I can't believe this story 'ended' like this. It's unbelievely intense and amazing at the same time. I can only wish to read on, but my parents are urging me to go to bed. UGH. This is a great story, I've always loves your writing style. Not too much detail, but you have some, but that's always a good thing. (because I never really like reading 5,0 word chapters) Everything is fantastic, and I can only urge you to make more, even though I have yet to read everything.
Incredible chapter; Incredible writing; Incredible story! I'll give you a tip: Never stop writing for the world, you've got too much to give up.
-Skyy.