poor carly D:

It was really well-written :DD (lol, i wish i could write like that XDD)

~xy.xo~

Great story. Poor Carly... I hope that in the series, she will get the chance to tell Jack how she really feels about him. It's sad that an innocent girl like herself was taken into the hands of the bad guy(s). Great job in writing this one-shot, I hope to read more of these types of stories in the future. =]


~AC2

Wow, that's a pretty haunting fanfic right there.

That was good. I am surching for a jack/carly story. But i didn't find one, till I saw your chapter stroy. Wish you'de didn't leave it by one chap...

Good job!

OMG!! I loved this story! You have to make a part 2!!

Poor Carly. Torn to love or hate Jack. It seems everyone thinks that's how it's going to end for her. Poor Carly and her bad luck. Great Work!