 Curuchamion 2009-02-15 . chapter 1One little correction... in Teal'c's first paragraph, I *hope* you meant him to say that the others had been "struck" by Cupid's weapon, not "stuck"! (That's what you get for not having it betaed - *winks*)
Other than that, this is the best fic of its genre I've seen. Which is saying a bit, as I'm not a 'shipper of any sort. Good work! |