So cute. My goodness. Spectabulous! (See what I've been forced to do? Comimg up with terrible made up words. Tisk on you.) I loved this. You keep the characters in perfect place. Mm, I certainly am hungry after that read. I'll make sure to keep moving up your story list tomorrow. Keep up the lovely work.

Allyssa

kinda confusing like i dont understand the whole cheetos thing. but it was funning i was laughing while i was reading and i didnt even know why!

THAT WAS JUST TO FUNNY! :)

Aw I loved that!! I am like the biggest fluff fan ever, so i can so appreciate where you're coming from. In fact, my fanfic is pretty much five chapters of fluff at the moment. It's so hard for me not to concentrate on the cute fluffy little detials and actually put some conflict in the story. hehe love it...you should try to continue this somehow, its really good!

I liked this a lot! I mean I think I'm in love now...this makes me think about a certain someone and it also really makes me want to read The Host right now...I'm just looking at the eye on the cover as I type...good job!