It is neat and cool

Excellent writing of the dialogue, it did a great job of capturing the pairs realtionship (even in death lol) I always wished they'd explore the past S.E.E.S stuff more so that you could see more Shinji and how the trio worked.

Anyway I thought it was a neat little concept and I laughed at the who matchmaking thing at the end, seemed to suit him in that odd way he is.

Smiles,
Neo

"'Your perfection was irritating, but no. I’m not upset at you.'"

^ ...best line ever. This was a great read; The tormentor/tormented relationship I always imagine between them was captured perfectly, haha. XD Like the others, I also had a moment of "...wait, I thought *AKI* was supposed to be the--", but the ending was delightful~.

Aw, nice~. ^_~ At first, I thought it was going to be a Shinji/Mitsu and thought that perhaps you made a mistake in your summary, but things turned out fine in the end, hehe. For some reason, I kept picturing Wolverine talking to Jean Grey everytime Shinjiro called Mitsuru 'red'! XD

From the title and the mention of Akihiko/Mitsuru in the summary, I actually expected something much darker. I was surprised to see who the actual ghost was, but you wrote Shinji's dialogue well. Even though he always seems like someone to get to the point, his elusiveness was the perfect touch for what Mitsuru needed to realise her feelings. Of course, it's just like him to use a motorbike accident to matchmake. If it doesn't shatter bones, it's not love

... Ahahaha! Nice one Lady Cheshire and it's good to read a story from you again. Hm... just like Shinjiro to use some rough method for matchmaking.