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WWEAngel
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
cuteness!
Ghostwriter
2009-02-17 . chapter 1
No. They didn't feel out of character. They're in college so they'd have a little more wisdom, but would still be uncertain about specific things. I feel that you captured that very well. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
bsloths
2009-02-17 . chapter 1
Happy Belated Singles Awareness Day! ;)

I'm not a Truman fan either, but go read unoriginal elizabeth's "The Truman Show" and you will understand him a lot better. It helped me be more objective about him.

I love your explanation of the Demily relationship. That's what I see happening, too.

Now, on to the fic:

I loved Emily-as-matchmaker, and how Dasey became friends first. I loved the whole "history" theme, too. It worked really well for this! And the whole ending was perfect!

I think you did a fine job keeping them in character - my feeling is, whenever Derek is in his "declaring his love for Casey" mode, he's automatically OOC, in anyone's fic, because we've never seen him that vulnerable before (We get a few clues from Sally, but he didn't love her nearly as much). So I think everyone was in character as much as they could be! Great oneshot!!
Don-Jam
2009-02-16 . chapter 1
Emily is soo demanding! Like it, Thanks.
DisforDasey
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
I love it! That is so sweet :D
Fabulous job!
mimibear
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
nice one and so cute... i love emily's matchmaking mode...
Lety
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
I really like this one-shot. I don't really think any of the character are OoC. Good Job!
Frogster
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Hooray! I've been wondering when I'd "hear" from you again. You did a great job with this. No, I didn't feel that anyone was OOC--Casey would be freaking out about "history," Emily would be buttinsky, and Derek--well, I guess he grew up. It's about time. But college does change people, I hear.

Hope you get CCoC updated really soon! I think my Valentine's Day Dasey fic is going to be a little--or a lot--late. I'm stuck in the middle...Anyway, update soon!

Happy Valentine's Day (late!)
somerdaye
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
NO! NONE OF THEM WERE OOC. IT WAS PERFECT. :D

Of course, you would've laughed hysterically to see the look on my face when I saw that the baby was named after me. Hell, my mom laughed, and she had no idea what I was up to. xD

ANYway.

You're a totally awesome writer - I adored it. :D

Keep writing - just remember not to name a somewhat fandomhated character after me, okay? :P


Oh, speaking of. I named a character in one of MY stories after you - it's a Harry Potter one called "Your Place or Mine?" so, yeah. Shameless advertisement. Check it out. xD


YAY! :D

THANK YOU! :D:D:D:D
princetongirl
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
loved it update soon
ladylockern
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
I don't think you should have mixed feelings about this story at all, it was a wonderfull read and well written. I really enjoyed the read
Super Reader
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Happy Valentine's Day! I hope you had a great day. :D All I did here was have a snowball fight with a couple of my friends. :)

This was so adorable! You always write the cutest Dasey. I'm sure your friend won't be disappointed. I loved the addition of Summer Daye. That's such a cute name! And I don't think any of the characters were OOC.
countryfan4life
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
Nicely written. I think you captured the character's personalities just fine, the only thing that seemed off to me was the fact that Derek made no jokes of any sort towards Casey. Even when he comforts her as she cries, Derek always say something funny about him not doing tears very well.
MermaidMidna
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
I really didn't think anyone was out of character. I mean, you got them down pretty well! It is a fanfiction, so they aren't going to be perfect, but I thought you did a near-flawless job! Good work! I'm going to have to read some of your other stories now!
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