i do like this story and i hope you decide to keep it going. i like how pastionate they are and that sev can read remus so easily. emajin the fun remus can have with that

aww poor remus cant let anyone know he loves sevvy

Oh please do write more! I love their relationship, and hope Remus figures out a way to get through to Sev!!
One comment, which I hope is constructive -- the second part of the daydream and when Sev takes Remus into his quarters seem very similar. I think it would help if you re-worded it.

Guh wonderful. A sequel? maybe paerhaps?

"I’m concerned I haven’t been any help to Dumbledore in locating Sev…" LMFAO! he's so out of it!! Who wouldn't... Anyone lucky enough for an encounter such as that would probably making out with a chair in a mental institute... the Snape effect.

I can't believe i haven't read this. And you've only written one story? you are. Crazy. You need to stop doing whatever you're doing. and come back to the computer. so many out there, like myself that need Snupin therapy... its so lacking these days.

Sex scenes.. what to say, what to say. One of those stories that make you feel really dirty. But wholly satisfied.

“No, I suppose not. I’m sorry, Severus.” Remus sighed, looking down at his hands, picking at his nails out of nervousness.

Adorfuckingable! I can just imagine Severus raking those sexy eyes of his, over this vulnerable, innocent Remus while super hard bulge on nether regions rapidly increases horizontally.. oh my gad.

Awesome. Write more.

Most brilliant. Hot, intelligent and beautiful description. How can I possibly write a sex scene after that?(beats head against wooden table). I've got to go read it again. lexy

Wow! This was wonderful. You really shout write more.

I really liked this :) normally i like remus/sirius, but you really pulled this off in a way that i can definitely enjoy as another couple, which isn't easy to do. So kudos to you!

Jennifer XX