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Reviews for: Her Personal Peter Pan
BluAlbino
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
Aw, cute. JD would make an adorable Peter Pan. I like how you changed your writing style to match the story, it was more authentic.
GenkaiShinigami
2009-02-17 . chapter 1
Oh, I loved this! ^_^ It was really different though, so I was like, woah, but I loved it either way. x] ♥

You're a really talented writer, bravo.
Lola Lie
2009-02-16 . chapter 1
Oh goodness, that was marvelous... I have always loved the story of Peter Pan, and it never occured to me that combining it with Scrubs would fit so perfectly - and it does! JD makes a great Peter, considering how he never really seems to grow up entirely in the show, and Elliot as Wendy is very likable and charming. I think I could take a guess at who Captain Hook would be in this AU. =]

Will you be continuing? If you do, I'd be really happy to see what comes next. I'm sure there would be some very funny scenes and dialogue later on. Otherwise, I'll look forward to your other works!
Owl Emporium
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
That was good writing, but something original would've been better. (:

Angelica
Amorina
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Aww, I wanted to know what happened when they got to Never Land. It would be awesome to see Peter Pan counterparts of Cox, Turk, Carla, Kelso and the Janitor. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this a lot, even though it's written in a very different style than your other fics. Can't wait for My Captain! (Pirate Cox = totally awesome idea. :D)
darkbunny92
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
A nice start. Now if you were to update... say...now that would be nice. It would be...
spidersfrommars
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
No offence, but I think this my least favourite of your fanfics so far.
She'sAManiac
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
hehe!
cutesy!
very adorable. i like jelliot from you!
Tell Her This
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Aww, that was ridiculously sweet. :) I really enjoyed it. Now, I have read Peter Pan so I can't comment on how well you kept with the style, but it was a really sweet oneshot. I really liked it. I loved the way you portayed Elliot as tthe young filthy rich girl and JD as Peter Pan, while still keeping them recongnisable to their Sacred Heart characters.

I really enjoyed it. Well done. :) (And, psst, I also wouldn't mind if you had the inclination to write more JD/Elliot stories. :P Just kidding. Or am I...?) :)
funkypartyweasel
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
Aww, that's so sweet! J.D. matches Peter Pan really well, with his occasionally childlike naivety... :) And poor Elliot! I think I remember one episode where she mentioned that her Dad gave her a dollar whenever she felt sad. It IS super fluffy, but I love fluff, so I adore this story! :) (And I can't believe how quickly you write all these stories! It puts the rest of us to shame... :) )
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