 BluAlbino 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Aw, cute. JD would make an adorable Peter Pan. I like how you changed your writing style to match the story, it was more authentic. |
 GenkaiShinigami 2009-02-17 . chapter 1Oh, I loved this! ^_^ It was really different though, so I was like, woah, but I loved it either way. x] ♥
You're a really talented writer, bravo. |
 Lola Lie 2009-02-16 . chapter 1Oh goodness, that was marvelous... I have always loved the story of Peter Pan, and it never occured to me that combining it with Scrubs would fit so perfectly - and it does! JD makes a great Peter, considering how he never really seems to grow up entirely in the show, and Elliot as Wendy is very likable and charming. I think I could take a guess at who Captain Hook would be in this AU. =]
Will you be continuing? If you do, I'd be really happy to see what comes next. I'm sure there would be some very funny scenes and dialogue later on. Otherwise, I'll look forward to your other works! |
 Owl Emporium 2009-02-15 . chapter 1That was good writing, but something original would've been better. (:
Angelica |
 Amorina 2009-02-15 . chapter 1Aww, I wanted to know what happened when they got to Never Land. It would be awesome to see Peter Pan counterparts of Cox, Turk, Carla, Kelso and the Janitor. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this a lot, even though it's written in a very different style than your other fics. Can't wait for My Captain! (Pirate Cox = totally awesome idea. :D) |
 darkbunny92 2009-02-15 . chapter 1A nice start. Now if you were to update... say...now that would be nice. It would be... |
 spidersfrommars 2009-02-15 . chapter 1No offence, but I think this my least favourite of your fanfics so far. |
 She'sAManiac 2009-02-15 . chapter 1hehe!
cutesy!
very adorable. i like jelliot from you! |
 Tell Her This 2009-02-15 . chapter 1Aww, that was ridiculously sweet. :) I really enjoyed it. Now, I have read Peter Pan so I can't comment on how well you kept with the style, but it was a really sweet oneshot. I really liked it. I loved the way you portayed Elliot as tthe young filthy rich girl and JD as Peter Pan, while still keeping them recongnisable to their Sacred Heart characters.
I really enjoyed it. Well done. :) (And, psst, I also wouldn't mind if you had the inclination to write more JD/Elliot stories. :P Just kidding. Or am I...?) :) |
 funkypartyweasel 2009-02-14 . chapter 1Aww, that's so sweet! J.D. matches Peter Pan really well, with his occasionally childlike naivety... :) And poor Elliot! I think I remember one episode where she mentioned that her Dad gave her a dollar whenever she felt sad. It IS super fluffy, but I love fluff, so I adore this story! :) (And I can't believe how quickly you write all these stories! It puts the rest of us to shame... :) ) |
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