Good chapter, even though it was filled with musical things, which wasn't really too interesting to me.

Interesting twist at the end, though. I wonder how Local Marty managed to figure out that the diagrams were for a time machine so easily - and I'm kind of curious as to what they're going to tell him. After all, Local Doc barely knows Local Marty, and it's not like he has any immediate proof for it. That sounds like an interesting mess you'll have to fix.

The Screwballs is a good name for Marty's band.

This part of the story is really interesting. I think this is one of my favourites, among your stories - as the altered world seems really fascinating.

Well, I'm looking forwards to reading more! This is an amazing story!

Nice chapter! I'm intruiged by the changes between the two realities. I'm looking forwards to more!

Hurry! Hurry to the saloon!! : )

On to Chapter 2!

This is a fascinating chapter. This is actually Jennifer's first time, visiting the TP/Clayton timeline. Maybe you should've added something in, in this chapter, to express Jenn's fascination at the ravine being called 'Clayton', as she always knew it as Eastwood. Still, it's good. Please update soon!

Interesting new chapter. I'm looking forwards to Ghost Town Hill Valley.

Also, you made a little mistake in the fifth-before last sentence, as you used Verne's name twice instead of Jules and Verne's names.

This is a good story so far. Well done.

Good chapter! I have to admit that I'm actually looking forward to the reality changing part.

Are you saying that, until now, Marty and Jennifer never time travelled outside of Hill Valley? Weird. Well, it's your opinion.

Update soon!

This is a great story so far.

Great first chapter! I can't wait to read more!!

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Nice chapter! I'm looking forward to when the real reality changing enters the story. That'll be interesting.