Aw! The quote at the end rocked, and this oneshot worked SO WELL for it!!

Wow, poor Jill. I never thought she'd have nightmares, but I guess it IS quite probable. I'm glad Hannah thought to go get Eustace, though, that's good! ^U^

Phew! He helped her, great! The ending was so cute! I'm glad he doesn't regret going with her! *U*
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Wonderful, finally a story about Jill and Eustace that was really, really good to read! Have you thought about a sequel, meeting the Pevensies from Jills POV?

Oh, so lovely! Eustace is a champion, he really is.

This was very well-written ... there's little more I can think of to say other than I loved it! One thing, though - Experiment House must be VERY large (not to mention luxurious) if they only have to share a room with one person; I always imagined them having dormitories.

Great work!

LOVE IT! Great story! aww, i love eustace and jill! That's so great! Well done!
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That Very Good! I'v never thinked about how Jill may feel about what happen at the cliff. Thank you for it.

“Don’t” Eustace said, and his voice really was fierce, “ever apologize for that.”

There needs to be a comma or something after "Don't". :D

I loved this. Seriously. They're adorable! ^_^

I love how Eustace is the only one that could wake her up. How she knew it was him without even being awake. :D

This was beautiful. Can't wait for the next one! ^_^

I did enjoy this; I often find fics with Jill and Eustace to be overdone, insipid, or flat. This was, instead, lovely. The nightmare idea was quite well done, and you handled their relationship marvelously. You didn't try to interpret their relationship; you let me draw my own conclusions, and I appreciate that.

I've also occasionally wondered when Jill met the Pevensies, I'm glad you brought that up. The dialogue was quite IC; and there was just the right amount of it! You handled the entire thing with skill; you referenced things outside of the story (I particularly appreciated the mentioning of Their covering his door with red paint) and didn't try to completely explain it -- you gave me just enough. I think what I'm trying to say is you didn't insult my intelligence.

You did a great job with this, and I quite enjoyed it.

Aw so sweet. I really love this.

Beautiful!
LG Luna

Oh, my, what to say about a story that makes me feel so good and so happy? It's so lovely to see how Eustace and Jill have grown from their stay in Narnia, and there are hints of how their Narnian light might spread to envelop Hannah as well. Your quote at the end--from The Four Loves, right?--adds so much to the story and to the characters of these two Friends. I have to mention how much I love the image at the beginning, with Jill dancing in Narnia. It put me right there at that dance, and it reminds me of what Narnia has over all other Otherworlds for many of us: it's the land of heart's desire. Write on!

aw that was so sweet and Eustace so wise. You wrote it beautifully. As a reader I could really feel Hannah and Jills fear and Eustaces remorse of his past.

Aww. There aren't many Jill and Eustace stories out there, so I'm glad you wrote this. It's interesting how they go and talk about Aslan and Narnia and not even concerned about Hannah being in the room (I hope she's asleep by then!). And you set it up nicely as to how Jill would eventually meet the Pevensies. A great one-shot!

Aw! I liked how you characterized them, and I liked Hannah. She was neat. Good job!

Brilliant! This was very, very good.

I have only one qualm: Why wouldn't Jill know who Edmund and the Pevensies are? Surely she heard of them during the journey to find Rilian, son of Caspian, who went the world's edge with Eustace and his cousins.

Oh thats beautiful! Thankyou for writing that. It felt "authentic" to me.

It also shows how changed Eustace was YET he was still "Eustace". Also gives a wonderful reason for Jill to get to meet and know the Pevensies.

Well done - thankyou.