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Reviews for: Every Freckle
MagdileanaO
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
I love Lita and sweet Randy,its a nice change.

I loved the ending too. Very romantic and a very appy ending.
TJ Sparkles
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Aw, how cute was the title? I imagined Randy and Lita lying together in the hotel, snuggled up and Randy just counting each of Li's freckles. I really loved it, hunn. Your Randy/Lita fics are always awesome!

It was so heartbreaking, the way you described Randy's reluctance to tell Lita his true feelings, and the pain and regret he felt once he let her go. But at least John was there to give him the kick in the ass he needed. LOL.

“Just get out of my life before you hurt me anymore.”
“Never.” He whispered, his hand holding her head tightly against him.

That gave me shivers.

:)

Tina
DarkAngelElektra
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Okay, now I'm going to cry. This was so heartbreaking! It was so well-written that I could hear it playing in my head, as if it was actually taking place. Randy and Lita are a great pairing...and, hell, Lita's just awesome! I miss her; I wish she'd come back!
Anyway, enough of my diatribe! Great fic, awesome job! Loved it!
kai1994
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
So sad , really romantic though. I wish Lita would come back, i know for a fact that she's very missed .
More?

GRTZ Kai1994!
cherrycokerocks
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Wow, that was heartbreaking honey but I loved it. My favourite part was when she slammed the door in his face and then threw the flowers at him. I could just picture his face.

Would you post this over at Lita fics? Pretty please?
Waves of Rage
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
so good yet so sad
Esha Napoleon
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
WOW!
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