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| Reviews for The Immortal Hero |
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  Guest 5/20/13 . chapter 1 So amazing! I love Harry as an elfling! The first chapter sounds good: As far as I can see, you didn't make Harry some kind of god like being, with unlimited powers. |
| Minnie 5/5/13 . chapter 15 What an amazing story! |
| Guest 4/30/13 . chapter 15 a wonderful story |
 narrassae 4/17/13 . chapter 15That was beautiful. That was truly an emotional rollercoaster, I enjoyed every second of it. I loved the concept of it, Harry finding a family that lives him without the BWL thing hanging over his head. I would suggest polishing up on your grammar, and making sure that the word you spelt actually means what you think it does, not just sound like the right word. Random example of what I mean is bear and bare the first one has two common meanings the mammal animal (polar bear, grizzly bear) and the second meaning is stand e.g. "it was more than I could bear." You were brilliant at the emotions. Especially towards the end when Harry calls him Dad for the first time, to the "I just wanted to say goodbye", the crowning achievement though was the last few chapters as you were wrapping up. I cried, and I connected with him and I understood why he needed to. I was with him every step of the way. Well done. I am glad to have read your story. Thank you very much for writing and completing such a wonderful story.. Wishing you the best! N |
| juniperlei 4/14/13 . chapter 5 Well its a interesting storybutharry is aorta op |
| Guest 4/6/13 . chapter 15 It was a very good story and I believe that a sequel might ruin the originality of this story. Please take this into acount (unless you have already written the sequel so...) Carry on writing like ths, I enjoyed the story and hope you similar ones. |
| EpikalStorms 3/27/13 . chapter 15 Oh my god. I loved this story so much... |
| Hesperis 3/26/13 . chapter 15 This is a very, very nice story! I'm sorry that it's already ended, but I'm happy that there was happy end! o) |
| Kimichan13 3/25/13 . chapter 15 I want to cry... it's such a wonderful story. 10 out of 10 from me - |
| Fu 3/23/13 . chapter 15 This story is perfect...*la sigh* Love it. Going to read the sequel now. :) |
| emilyfridaythe13th 3/17/13 . chapter 15 i love this story i cant wait for the sequel |
| Kingofpop12345 3/16/13 . chapter 2 wherwes the talk this is boring if no one talks |
| Larisya 3/14/13 . chapter 15 Oh, I loved the original, but this is so much better! Perfect! |
| Larisya 3/14/13 . chapter 8 OH NOOOOOO! There, an "OH" for you. |
| twilight4ever359 3/2/13 . chapter 15 This story was amazing, I loved it, especially the ending xxx |
