I'm likin' where this is going. so far, awesome.

Thundercracker isn't a F-22 raptor he's a F-15

This website definitely needs more Transformers Cybertron/Galaxy Force stories! Great story!

I don't think it's a bad story. I think Lori saying to Coby being a smartass was pretty funny. Keep going girl cool fic. Ya don't want to keep your lovely audience waiting do you?

C.D.

I really like this fic. It's an awsome Transformers Cybertron fic. Keep up the writing girl. Your lovely audience is waiting.

C.D.

Good job SP!

I am defiantly looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work :)