Pretty good. What's begging mode?

TAYSIE! *superhugs* I didn't know you were a member of ! Better look out for you in future _

Anyway, super fic! Is this what you posted at DM for your Arches? Great stuff!
Alae aka Sirayn

Great writing! Accepted tests are soo sad and you really captured the emotions in your writing. Hey, and thanks for pointing out those corrections in my story. I did proof-read it, honest!)

Kool. Why stop now?

Good three arches. The only one I've actually liked so far.. and I've read three.

Take a look at mine and let me know what you think!

really good...

style's a bit wierd. It was ok.

even with that extra information, I still think it's great.

Alrighty, I'm not one to give constructive criticism on the WoT series, since Into The Arches was my very first exposure to it. So I got a wee bit confused as I was thrust into the deep end with it. BUT after reading it, I think I get the gist of it. Maybe. Which may or may not help when I read your other WoT fic.

ANYWAY, despite my utter confusion from not knowing the rules, I thought it was fabulously interesting. Your writing is amazing, a pleasure to read. Well Done!

Really, really good. Taya's confusion and despair are well captured as she goes through a series of wrenching choices, choosing Aes Sedai each time.

Its ok, but not great