This was absolutely lovely! I'm amazed it doesn't have more reviews - you write so well and this was simply beautiful. I loved the poem you included and how you sculpted the story around it and I loved Jake and Bella's humorous discussion around it. I also loved the whole Embry/Leah interaction - I've always liked that couple. This was great!:-)

I loved the artistic outlook in this fic, GREAT job!

Hey. Just finished reading this, and I have to say, very nice story. Great job.

That was so sweet! Jake and Bella and Leah and Embry and aw! So good...

Very differnet but I love it!

THATS SO SWEET I LIKE CRYED IVE BEEN IN THE SAME PREDICUMENT ONE GUY LEFT BUT ITS TIME TO MOVE ON U KNOW EITHER WAY I LOVE IT

Great! :D

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