Ouchie.

Very disturbing...I still like it though. xD

V.

W-O-W. That was chilling, love the last line "justice is dead" when you think of the names of the four monarches it's a true fact. But it's kinda creepy that the youngest and most joyful and loving pevensie is the one that killed the guy then again i don't blame her.

Aw, man... This is so sad! I LOVE it, though! Go, Lu; I loved her line and action at the end! He SO deserved it! XC Poor Ed! He NEVER deserved (nor will deserve) that! T.T Rock on! This was very intriguing and brilliant! ^U^ *U*
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that was SO GOOD!

*applauds*

fabulous continuation. v. satisfying end, totally gave me chills.

kudos to you!

Chilling, but a great continuation of "Nor Cease In Singing Twilight". And the last line, Wow. But it is actually true seeing as Edmund was the Just one not Lucy.

OMG!
I loved it. Justice is dead... Great!
Luna

Oh! I shuddered at the end there. This is very, very well-written and the "Justice is dead" line is fantastic - well done. Lirenel's story shocked me and this has too - my mouth fell open at the end.

Well done!

Like Lirenel's story, this is stark and cutting and painful. But it fits well with Nor Cease in Singing Twilight, and is a great, if terribly depressing, continuation. The fact that is was Lucy who killed the assassin somehow makes it all the more terrible; Lucy, the youngest and most joyous of the four, slitting a man's throat. And the last words he ever hears are "Justice is dead."

*shivers*

Bravo.

Ooh, well done! The last line was chilling, but it worked really well. Good work!

*sniffs*
Ed can not die, it's just not fair.

That being said, I really do like it. Like E said, not my cip of tea what with Ed's death, but it really packed a punch and oh wow love, keep writing like this. It's goregous, and I got this awful shiver down my spine when I read little, innocent, sweet, /Lucy/ killing that guy. Good job!

Kay

Oh dear. I still wince at the mention of Edmund's death. I must say, this will haunt me tonight. The last bit was especially chilling. The thought of Lucy killing someone in cold blood (and not in war) sends shivers down my spine.

Well, it's not exactly my cup of java, but there's no denying the impact and the stark emotion of this. It's shocking in every way, and very effective.

*claps hands* Excellent! Exactly how I imagined this scene playing out. The only difference was I had pictured the "Justice is dead" part would be declared loudly, but I like your way much, much better. It's definitely more creepy to have Lucy whisper it in the assassin's ear as she kills him. Gives me shivers!

Also, I'm still blushing that you like NCIST enough to write this. And you did a great job in writing this, I'm very impressed.

Holy mother of God, this is so ** good!