So much suspense

o.0 Scary...keep on going! what happens next? Can't wait for the next chappie, update soon!

hey u should make a story out of this amy come back as a ghost like shadow and is looking for him she not gonna do nothing to him she just wanna know why he killed her and then he tell her then they set out to find all the chaos,e so they can be brought back to life thats when they fall in love oh and it should be M that would be a great story and im sure alot of people will agree heheh

O.O Poor Amy...

Anyway, very good job; every sentence had me on the edge of my seat, your descriptions are extremely vivid, and the story was just the right length! I think that if you and Stephen King teamed up, you would make not millions, but BILLIONS from your stories.

You would think because this is ShadAmy that he'd let her slide, or maybe its just me. But I was surprised about her death D: You wrote this very well though. I could see it turning into a movie. Like Shadow asks Rouge to get into her car, but she's cautious, and so when he tries to kill her, she kicks him in the face and calls her fellow FBI operatives xD

Lol, bit odd... But very good! xD

oh wow didnt expect that xD

its cool though! i like

Oh gosh, you got me spooked! I was about to stop midway after Kayleigh was brutally murdered, but hell, I just kind of skimmed that section and moved on!

-shudders-

Spectacular work as always! 3

What the f- was that? Thought this was shadamy -.-

O.o WOAH! O.o Col!

Hubby: Honey, why are you huddled over in a corner?

-I...I just read the Hitch-hiker and it was freakin' scary. It was great and I recommend everyone to read it. Everything was described perfectly, and it felt so...so real. Poor Amy...

Hubby: Are you serious? It's just a story.

-Oh yeah, than why don't you read then.

Hubby: I'm not much of a Sonic fan. I rather read about Naruto.

-Just read it!

He starts to read the story, and at first he did not seem fazed at all. Then little tiny beads of sweat started to form on his head, and his breathing was beginning to get heavier by the second.

-Honey you okay. Hey...hey honey whats wrong?

Thud! He then collapsed onto the floor and appeared to be unconscious.

-Oh lord what a baby.

LOL! Laters,

LunaMiakoda

this was a delight too read very well writen.

I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE WRITTEN THE STORY BUT I THINK THAT IT NEEDS A FEW CHAPTERS BEFORE THIS PART TO EXPLAIN WHY HE IS KILLING WOMEN AND HOW HE DIED, WHEN THEY ARE GIVIG HIM A RIDE IN THEIR CAR. AND ALSO WHAT HAPPENS TO AMY AND HOW DO HER FRIENDS AND FAMILY TAKE IN THE NEWS OF HER THIS MAKES IT BETTER.

WOW! That was really good! :}

sux that she moved away from him...other than that, nice story