Hubby: Honey, why are you huddled over in a corner?

-I...I just read the Hitch-hiker and it was freakin' scary. It was great and I recommend everyone to read it. Everything was described perfectly, and it felt so...so real. Poor Amy...

Hubby: Are you serious? It's just a story.

-Oh yeah, than why don't you read then.

Hubby: I'm not much of a Sonic fan. I rather read about Naruto.

-Just read it!

He starts to read the story, and at first he did not seem fazed at all. Then little tiny beads of sweat started to form on his head, and his breathing was beginning to get heavier by the second.

-Honey you okay. Hey...hey honey whats wrong?

Thud! He then collapsed onto the floor and appeared to be unconscious.

-Oh lord what a baby.


LOL! Laters,

LunaMiakoda

this was a delight too read very well writen.

I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE WRITTEN THE STORY BUT I THINK THAT IT NEEDS A FEW CHAPTERS BEFORE THIS PART TO EXPLAIN WHY HE IS KILLING WOMEN AND HOW HE DIED, WHEN THEY ARE GIVIG HIM A RIDE IN THEIR CAR. AND ALSO WHAT HAPPENS TO AMY AND HOW DO HER FRIENDS AND FAMILY TAKE IN THE NEWS OF HER DEATH.HOPE THIS MAKES IT BETTER.

WOW! That was really good!! :}

sux that she moved away from him...other than that, nice story

Ho my F* GOD! That was AWESOME Prosha!
WOW! Really! The details and the way that he kills her ith his fingers on her heart... WOW

Whoa, this story is unlike any other shadamy ones i've read, great job.

oh creepy, loved it for sure ^^

pity he had to kill Amy, i was hoping he would fall in love with her or something. but this is shadow lol, plus he's dead so that would put a spanner in the works of a relationship lol. excellent work my friend, i was totally gripped the whole way through. keep it up ^^ CHOW!

Kitsune

Wow I loved it, especially the ending! It was dark and sad, but that's what made it special too ^w^
Keep doing an awesome job like this, Prosha

Whoa whats going on? its not bad but can there be a little explanation as to exactly what happened??

nice work prosha! as always you did a great job!

Wow, very exciting and spooky at the same time ^-^. I loved it. Way to go! XD

Ignore my last dumb review XP!

RE: How Dark & Sad u.u! But a very good job as always ;3!
Awh! Shadow only did that with Amy, how cute!
And the fact he felst kinda shamed was lovely X3!
Great work Prosha-chan, I like it a lot!
Keep doing great job like this!

~Elys

It's so sickening and dark...I love it! LOL

How dark & sad! >.