 LunaMiakoda 2009-11-07 . chapter 1Hubby: Honey, why are you huddled over in a corner?
-I...I just read the Hitch-hiker and it was freakin' scary. It was great and I recommend everyone to read it. Everything was described perfectly, and it felt so...so real. Poor Amy...
Hubby: Are you serious? It's just a story.
-Oh yeah, than why don't you read then.
Hubby: I'm not much of a Sonic fan. I rather read about Naruto.
-Just read it!
He starts to read the story, and at first he did not seem fazed at all. Then little tiny beads of sweat started to form on his head, and his breathing was beginning to get heavier by the second.
-Honey you okay. Hey...hey honey whats wrong?
Thud! He then collapsed onto the floor and appeared to be unconscious.
-Oh lord what a baby.
LOL! Laters,
LunaMiakoda |
 Davifflaelan 2009-10-31 . chapter 1this was a delight too read very well writen. |
 leodard 2009-09-17 . chapter 1I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE WRITTEN THE STORY BUT I THINK THAT IT NEEDS A FEW CHAPTERS BEFORE THIS PART TO EXPLAIN WHY HE IS KILLING WOMEN AND HOW HE DIED, WHEN THEY ARE GIVIG HIM A RIDE IN THEIR CAR. AND ALSO WHAT HAPPENS TO AMY AND HOW DO HER FRIENDS AND FAMILY TAKE IN THE NEWS OF HER DEATH.HOPE THIS MAKES IT BETTER. |
 ScrougeXAmyXMephiles 2009-09-07 . chapter 1WOW! That was really good!! :} |
 BurningFireFlower360 2009-07-21 . chapter 1sux that she moved away from him...other than that, nice story |
 anirac nemesis 2009-05-24 . chapter 1Ho my F* GOD! That was AWESOME Prosha!
WOW! Really! The details and the way that he kills her ith his fingers on her heart... WOW |
 Xtrasuperscourgegirl 2009-02-27 . chapter 1Whoa, this story is unlike any other shadamy ones i've read, great job. |
 Kitsune Disciple 2009-02-20 . chapter 1oh creepy, loved it for sure ^^
pity he had to kill Amy, i was hoping he would fall in love with her or something. but this is shadow lol, plus he's dead so that would put a spanner in the works of a relationship lol. excellent work my friend, i was totally gripped the whole way through. keep it up ^^ CHOW!
Kitsune |
 ShadowFeline 2009-02-19 . chapter 1Wow I loved it, especially the ending! It was dark and sad, but that's what made it special too ^w^
Keep doing an awesome job like this, Prosha |
 YSRS 2009-02-18 . chapter 1Whoa whats going on? its not bad but can there be a little explanation as to exactly what happened?? |
 shadowamypunk 2009-02-16 . chapter 1nice work prosha! as always you did a great job! |
 sonicfan18 2009-02-15 . chapter 1Wow, very exciting and spooky at the same time ^-^. I loved it. Way to go! XD |
 Elys 2009-02-15 . chapter 1 Ignore my last dumb review XP!
RE: How Dark & Sad u.u! But a very good job as always ;3!
Awh! Shadow only did that with Amy, how cute!
And the fact he felst kinda shamed was lovely X3!
Great work Prosha-chan, I like it a lot!
Keep doing great job like this!
~Elys |
 Ember Frost 2009-02-15 . chapter 1It's so sickening and dark...I love it! LOL |
 ShadowxAmy 2009-02-15 . chapter 1How dark & sad! >. |