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Belphegor
2009-11-26 . chapter 4
Silly me. I meant the last *pieces* - there's still Batman and Hawkgirl left :o)

At the risk of repeating myself, this is bloody brilliant and exactly the thing to read when you're feeling a bit down. Every single chapter of it. Curiously, even though Flash is one of my favourite characters and I always have a soft spot as far as he's concerned, my favourite bits in this possibly had to do with characters like Diana or John, whom I don't read much about - but your story enhances what's "human" about them and I love these little details. And then you've got Clark, the six-foot-plus farm boy who for me smells of soap and his mum's apple pie and whom you make me love more than Superman.

Hmm. Getting wordy again. Sorry :o)
Belphegor
2009-11-24 . chapter 5
I love this. Really, really love this, with all my heart. It's amazing how a few simple loose sentences can really shape out the character, give him/her the flesh and blood and heart that you know they had but couldn't put into words. Each chapter is absolutely perfect, each sentence fits each character like a glove, and rest assured that each really did get a laugh or a shudder or another kind of appropriate response. Thanks for putting this up, and I'm awaiting the last piece with both squee-worthy glee and dread ('cause it'll probably be the last :S)

So, yeah, thanks. Made my day.
Belphegor :o]
Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl
2009-11-05 . chapter 5
That was good. Great job! :D
The Demon from The Village Hidden in The Mist
2009-10-26 . chapter 5
DO BATMAN! DO BATMAN!
AngelForm
2009-10-25 . chapter 5
A very insightful look at the characters.
ShayeraElektra
2009-09-23 . chapter 5
I loved it!
Who will be the next Shayera or Batman? Both will be great for sure (I love them both)!
I can't wait for the updates!
wild wolf free17
2009-09-18 . chapter 4
Aww, Wally. Totally the best ones so far.
wild wolf free17
2009-09-18 . chapter 2
Oh, #49 aches. Well done on these, too!
wild wolf free17
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
I like all of these, but my favorites are the ones with Flash. *hee*
Green Tea fan
2009-09-17 . chapter 5
John's is pretty cool. I like it. But I can't help but notice that he is the only one without a writer's choice. Plus, you can tell that Flash is a favorite since he is always mentioned at least twice.
kobez2.0
2009-09-14 . chapter 5
I'm glad the website finally let me read this update, it was good. I can't wait for the next one.

-Kobez-
Munz
2009-06-27 . chapter 4
This is really interesting. I love your take on all your characters. But I really interested in Hawkgirl and Batman's. However, Superman's "037. Survive. Losing his powers is a painful reminder of how hard it must be for many of the less durable –read: normal– Justice League members to even stay alive, some days" really got to me. I do not know why exactly. Hope that you update soon.
AllThatGlistens
2009-05-17 . chapter 4
Really cute and really cool story. I enjoyed it a lot.
Kurama111
2009-04-21 . chapter 4
I love your chapter about the Flash. I think it's so funny! :D Where did you get all these quotes from? Did you make them up or did you get them from the show?
Kaiamara
2009-04-19 . chapter 4
I think you captured Wally's thoughts and voice pretty well. It sounds really good for him.
Nicely done~
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