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pensiveaddict 5/3/12 . chapter 1
It was pretty good. But sometimes, the Marauder language can make things a little difficult to understand, with too many pronouns. But it was mostly well-written. The ending seemed to lack the punch. If you have the time, you could rework it. I loved Moony's lines; bloody brilliant they were.
Princess Shania 8/1/11 . chapter 6
Did YOU ever get caught?
undecided1996 6/24/11 . chapter 8
i love this fic haha epeially te first chappie ehheeh write more sooon plzzzzzzzzz
StarKid McFly 1/18/11 . chapter 8
I love this so much! :D
anana553 11/26/10 . chapter 1
*keeps laughing for a while*

good job and nice chap one )
Allibella731 9/21/10 . chapter 7
It was hilarious!

Perfect portrayal of all of the characters! Keep writing!
dork-with-glasses 8/8/10 . chapter 8
This is bloody brilliant! Honestly, I love this story. It's witty, in-character and just a fantastic read. The idea is really good too and you've pulled it off really well. It's amazing! I can't wait for more!
morfoulaassi 7/17/10 . chapter 8
hilarious...
LittlexxBeauty 4/4/10 . chapter 8
ahahaha, this is brilliant! i was laughing soo much during this :P

i love how you make james and sirius so awesome :D

xoxox
Gadhudaj 2/9/10 . chapter 8
Just finished all eight chapters!

I thinks this story is amazing!

Can you please write some more?
Gadhudaj 2/8/10 . chapter 5
This story is AMAZING! PLEASE write more! I can't wait to find out what other things James and Sirius have gotten up to!
Irrelevancy 2/8/10 . chapter 8
Beautiful

xD
OhtarIstar666 2/8/10 . chapter 8
I always wanted ringlet nose hair. Not really, but it would be cool. They should of done it Snape! He has a huge nose. Think how awesome the ringlets would be!
Oceanfur 2/8/10 . chapter 8
Oh, this chapter is so funny. Their god mood is contagious, I can't stop smiling!
Oceanfur 7/26/09 . chapter 7
I love this story. Muggle Studies was my favorite si far, though. I've daydreamed about doing that in history class before. I feel their pain,as I had the misfortune of sitting next to the window. And the tests all had study guides anyway, it's not like we needed to pay attention... And they're all funny, that was just my favorite one.
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