Very interesting, I like it. Update soon please.

I like it! You haven't updated it in a while, but I like it. I'm a Vince/Holly shipper, but I always thought that Gary and Holly should have hooked up eventually. I like the way you've written it too!

This is completely awful! If it was a playwright i would understand, but as a story its not good. i only read the 1st chapter so maybe it gets better; however, you need to be more descriptive i got lost in the plain conversation without anything. & you have grammar mistakes like boughten? it seems like it would be good. like tension of why holly couldn't live across the hall. i like it! but the writing just needs some improving. But for all i know it could have improved during the story. If so, i am sorry for being so critical by just the 1st chapter i will read because it may get better

Hey update soon I actually lost intrest in the story because you wouldn't update but I'm hoping you'll update soon now that I found the story again. Please update soon. :D

Hey can you update soon I really wanna see what happens i love this story so far and wanna see Gary and Tina's reaction.

Aloha

Maka

Hey i like that holly finally told gary but the only thing was that it was kinda forced because he came to see her but i like that tina caught her saying it was his brilliant LOL well i hope you update soon. Good writing keep it up.

Aloha :)

Maka

Hey could you please update some time soon because i love this story and i wanna see what happens. Well update soon Please!

Aloha

Maka

Hey whats up i love this story and i hope ou update soon because i love this story a lot it's awesome my favorite story ever update soon.

Aloha

Brie

hey whats up... i like your story would you please update i wanna see what gary does if and when he finds out well update soon.

Aloha

Brie

Hey whats up you should totally update i like this story whats gary gunna do lol. well update soon!

Aloha

Brie Brie

I love it please rite more!

I really like this story a lot . Please update

I like it... A little confusing at times to follow but still like it.

Oh My God! This was so good. I would have never expected Holly and Gary but now I can. Anyway, Awesome writing

i like it

update soon please!