Sheesh. This is really amazing.

I love the way you interpret the characters.

super duper good. :D

Woah.

That's great. I love a good M&M, and you did this one really well. It totaly took me by suprise when Mello just grabbed Matt, but twas good suprise. Good suprise is harder to write; it's like, oh! that was unexpected but makes this so much better.

*Rambling*

XD

But yes, great work!

Oh, how lovely. x) I really like the way that Mello's subconscious sort of shows him the reality, and he turns to Matt to fix things - enlists Matt to fix things, really. The line about replacing the negative images with Matt is fantastic, and I love that he lets his guard down at the end. :)