Good: Very intruiging.

Bad: Too short.

I don't normally read poetry or song fics, but since you really impressed me with "Fallen Prophecy," I made an exception.

I actually wasn't overly impressed. I guess... For one thing, it was sort of boring. That's not entirely fair because it's an opinion, but maybe making it more detailed would help. I mean, it seems as though you're trying to be very mysterious, but don't quite make it all the way there. It's also awfully short, granted that's forgivable because it's a poem.

Maybe poetry isn't your bag, or maybe I'm just not refined enough to get it? heh, ah well. Your score:

Overall Score: 7.0 out of 10

P.S. Nice bio, by the way. Your "little rant session" I really liked. I mostly agree with everything you said, especially the parts about spelling/grammar. Once I read a story where someone used net-speak in dialogue. God, that was terrible...

You give new meanin gto the term 'Loving yourself'

Thank you thank you thank you.

The relationship between Sheik and Zelda fascinates me. And yours is a fascinating poem. It's so sad in its own way...

Keep on writing. Poems. On Sheik.

Thanks again!

Woah... deep!

Okayokayokay... now i KNOW that you said not to take this literally. I KNOW it's

figurative, metaphoric, symbolic, etc. I believe you, I trust you! However. I am the

biggest (the only?) Zelda/Sheik fan on the internet. (Not Zelda AS Sheik, but

Sheik as his own person and, well, you get me. _ ) So, on that level too,

this just does it for me. Yum. So there. :)

somehow i think this is a scam to get more reviews, but whatever. gak. anyway, i am not "one with poetry" or anything, but this wuz pretty good. dont be offended if i dont read that monsterously big fic u have under zelda. i dont read long stories.

Interesting. I like it.

I can so see your poem and where it's coming from! :)

short but cool, i love the legend of zelda games and i love poetry. great job and if you have the time please r&r some of my stuff. once again, awsome job