Teary eyes~~

You know, I had to write a poem for my English class. It had to rhyme, it had to have iambic pentameter (at least), it had to have a form (if possible...), and it had to have a theme. And while your poem had none of this (okay! it did have a theme), it was still better than mine. Though, I swear I thought the first three or four lines belonged in a song...

Very good!

WB-chan

This was a good poem! I love the Kagura/Sesshomaru pairing! I almost cried when i read her death scene in the manga! ^_^

Pretty awesome poem! You're really gifted!

Two words: Beautiful and Moving. :)

Uhh not quite sure how i feel about it. guess I'm kinda neutral. I liked it...I think...iuuno poems aren't my thing. Still I think it was done well.

much love, a terrible loss and a breathtaking tale

Amazing. It fit Kagura perfectly and her relationship with Sesshoumaru. You did a wonderful job, niisan.

Kawii Inu'no 45

GLOMPS
Yay, you're here.
Anyway I enjoyed your poem as always, each word carried a sense of purpose in the message you delivered.
I loved it!