I loved this chapter! Have a nice journey! Many kisses!

I likes the conversation betwwen Sara and Zane! Great chapter! Many kisses!

That was a fun chapter, he he he, Sarah yelled at Zane. I think they are starting to tolerate each other. Well actually Sarah cares and Zane tolerates. That's what I say antisocials do instead of care or love. Bad selfish, she used his own logic against him. Tehee Keep it up

Sara yelled at Zane! They're getting closer or is it my imagination? Anyway, great chapter! Many kisses!

Ah! Sarah certainly has different values than chazz can't wait for the next chapter.

It was a really funny chapter! Chazz's and Sara's duel was priceless! Many kisses!

Sara on sugar rash was quite funny! Awesome chapter! Many kisses!

Another great chapter! The incident with the album was so funny! Many kisses!

I feel so bad for Sara. She's just trying to make Zane feel better. And it's the thought that counts.

Atticus seemed to have a lot of fun teasing Zane. But it's always fun to tease Zane.

"They baked you a cake…donut…pastry-thing." XD This made me laugh. I think that's the way someone describe a cake that I made.

And of course Atty would ask Zane if Sara was his girlfriend.

Sorry I didn't review that last chapter. But this was a great update, and I can't wait to read the next one.

cake…donut…pastry-thing. XD

luvs. update soon please!

I couldn't stop laughing at Atticus' attempt to open the door! And Sara's present was really sweet even if she didn't understand Zane's real condition. Many kisses!

Awesome-nity like Sara would say! You left a cliffhanger! I can't wait to see Sara's reaction! Many kisses!

interesting chapter; kinda sad in parts...but i liked it overall.

i can just imagine what zane is thinking right now...XD

update soon!

YES! You started the sequel, it only took me 6 days to find out.

I think I finally figured out why Sara calls Zane, Ziti. It's because he initials are Z.T. ZITI! I am so slow like that sometimes.

Well, anyway interesting title and summary, I'm curious to see where this is heading. Keep up the fantastic work.

This is going to be an awesome sequel!

Poor Sara...she's just trying to lift everyone's spirits. And being called a Mary Sue is never fun...

Hope Zane's okay...but he probably deserves a purple nurple...as painful as that is...

Does Sara hiccup when she's upset or distraught?

x3 And soaking her hand in the tea! I laughed when I read that...but writer's cramp is a common plague in detention halls...or for writers, I suppose.

Anyway, this is a great first chapter. I don't really see anything that needs to be criticized. All the characters are in character, (especially Blair...ugh...) And the insults directed at Sara...are all too common from 'canon characters' and writers...oh well.

Your power of description is amazing...all I can really say is that you're doing a great job. It's really creative how you incorporate your own character into the story, but keep the plot the same...definitely not the average OC...

Can't wait for an update!