|Reviews for The Change You Want to See|
| Atlantima 11/6/11 . chapter 1
A couple of grammar errors:
"They'll be other boys." - should be "There'll be"
"Bobby Reynolds and I going to go out now." - should be "ARE going to go out now."
| Guest 8/31/09 . chapter 1
thoroughly enjoyed that
| zeusfluff 2/16/09 . chapter 1
I liked the way you wrote this story, it was well written. I don't really have anything to say about grammar, you hit it right on the mark. Again, thanks for sharing a great story!