finish story more donnie/raph

Beautiful story. This is pretty much they way I've always thought of Don and Raph's relationship. Don being the non-judgmental listener that Raph needs.

I love the idea of Raph as Donnie's hero, perhaps, you'll write a story exploring that concept?

Oh this is so sad and amazing at the same time! I really hope you continue with this because I'm interested in how you're going to take this idea.

This was a sweet story. I really liked the part about how they were writing essays about their heroes & Donnie wrote about Raph. That really made me go "Aw! How sweet!". Younger siblings sure can surprise you like that, just when u think they are trying to drive u away, it turns out they really look up to u.

Great job!

Great story - now going on to read the others.

:D

This is so beautifully sad. ;_; I love seeing this side of Raph. Excellent job! :)

To reiterate previous statements: T.T

Dear God, that's wonderful. I love slightly insane Raph, and I love Good Genes references. And I love this fic. In comparison, I fear my gift shall epic-fail and be suckish because it's probably not half as well-written as this.

"Leo and Mikey kept him grounded, but Donatello was the ground."
^0.o You genius.

...;__;...This is AWESOME! I'm just...I'm not crying! 'sniffle'

Mikey: AW...tissue?

Me: Thanks...'blows nose'

Leo: While Chibi tries to stop crying...'ducks balled-up tissue'...I'm sure she'd like to know when the rest are coming out.

Me: I'll be back!

It's always wonderful to see a new writer with ability pop up and surprise me every now and again. I do love the concept of folding the cranes, though I found it strange to have Raph doing it at first. Yet, as time progressed it made more sense to me, as if it symbolized that rare fragile part of him that Don could bring out so easily. Though I do find it strange that Leo wouldn't know the story of Sadoko. He's so involved in Japanese culture, it struck me as odd for both Donatello and Raph to know as children, but not Leonardo as a teenager.

Anywho, I'll be keeping my eye out for the next addition to the series. Keep up the good work!

Much Love,
Willowfly

I really like the idea of Raph so concentrated in his work, folding those cranes, rather than acting physically like he usually does when faced with a problem.

Keep 'em comin' :D -hi5-

p.s woohoo for Don/Raph pre-slash!