 I love NaruHina 8/4/10 . chapter 1 Soo... are you saying that Naruto and Hinata have a very complicated, yet very deep relationship?
I like it! :)
This is how I like to think about NaruHina!
But, the ending sort of makes me feel like NaruHina isn't meant to be and that they are only meant to be friends. :(
I still like this fic though!
Great job! |
 jadedsiren 3/27/09 . chapter 1This was good. poetic and warm.
You didn't rush it and because of that it had wonderful tone and you could feel the strength and love between them, despite their
confusion and the missed hints. This needs another chapter.
Its beautiful but feels incomplete. They've grown so much together but are missing that last link- I would love to see how you'll connect it:) |
 Lover of Stories 24 2/26/09 . chapter 1Ah, I love NaruHina. This was really cute. By the way, I'm really sorry that I haven't been on here for so long. Do you still remember me? Anyways, I've become too busy to beta-read anymore, but I will still try to look at your stories on here and review them. Your writing is a joy to read. ) |
 anon 2/17/09 . chapter 1 beautiful.
very poetic, especially the last three lines..
i like how you portrayed naruto as a thoughtful person underneath the happy, bubbly facade.. (:
the naruhina is bittersweet cute, i like. ) |
 Zamoria 2/16/09 . chapter 1Beautiful piece. Really loved it. And I also loved how you've written it. It flowed smoothly, and you did an awesome job developing Hinata's and Naruto's changing relationship.
Please please please consider writing a continuation. They're misunderstandings and confusions are so frustrating for the reader. One of them really has to speak out loud. |
 faitm8 2/16/09 . chapter 1 aw! keep going. seriously |
 elias 2/15/09 . chapter 1 nice story! |