Mawhahaha! Great one shot! It still ** me off that you only get to use Flynn for TEN MINUTES! GAH. Loved the fic!

Oh my gods...that made my day. XD I couldn't stop laughing! Very cute/funny ending, too. :)

I found this fanfiction pretty good, especially the ending. However, I felt that the action wasn't intense enough; I didn't feel that sense of suspense one gets when they see or read about a character fighting in a battle, especially a tournament. Also, there just wasn't enough emotion in it. But your description was good and I liked the plot.

Aw, how often do you see a seme!Flynn? Well, it's not like there's a lot of ToV fanfiction to begin with...but yeah. I liked this. My favourite part is the one about Flynn's cooking. I always love it when a character sucks at cooking. xD Please write more?

ah, the 100-man melee. surprisingly enough, I beat it with Yuri really easily, but still can't beat it with anyone else, despite being like, lvl 50+. but god, yes, bad cooking and cheesy lines ftw! and Yuri, you really do need to learn healing artes (good god, when estelle was gone, it was... horrible)