 MisterJB 2009-04-23 . chapter 8This one gotta be one of the best stuff you ever wrote |
 Bronx Shogun 2009-03-28 . chapter 2I would just like to say that I love your writing style, and I truly wish my style was as fantastic as yours. Sadly, It's not even close. |
 runickenaz 2009-03-19 . chapter 10I absolutely find your style of writing an inspiration. I do like your characterization and emotions displayed throughout the one-shots left me wanting for more. You stayed simple with description yet concise as each chapter flows without confusion while hinting Nu Wa's hidden close intimacy with the Hero of Chaos.
From what I seen, your vocabulary is something I have not witness in fanfiction, and by further reading, I admit: I had to check definitions for some words I never heard of.
I also think that the goddess and Cao Cao are the perfect challenge to write about and you, fellow author, must be proud of your work.
And yes, the complexity of man is indeed vast and your words convey that badass idealism in a way I cannot myself. Excellent work! |
 HarborRat 2009-03-11 . chapter 8Thank you for restoring my faith in fanfiction and fiction as a whole. It's been too long since I've been able to smile while reading a piece not only because of the work itself, but for brilliant use of language. Each chapter is truly a work of art, the character's progression, the dynamics of their relationship and the ability to have Mengde's ambition hang over them like a thunderstorm, growing with intesity in each segment. Just brilliant. |
 MisterJB 2009-03-10 . chapter 7angelhood. I liked that one |
 HarborRat 2009-03-10 . chapter 7Wow. Just an awesome read. Beautiful writing, perfect dialogue and very sensual. Very well done. |
 MisterJB 2009-03-06 . chapter 6if this was nowadays, Cao Cao would have an cellphone under the table and would be listening to a ipod XD |
 Jenizaki 2009-03-03 . chapter 3Another good one! :D I'm running out of praise. You're a great writer! |
 Jenizaki 2009-03-03 . chapter 2Yeow! That's a hot chapter XD
Once again great chapter. You provided us with the facts- Cao Cao's a horny bugger, without giving explicitly overdone details and making one squirm uncomfortably. (Then again, I usually shy away from graphic lemons, so that's just what me talking.)
Anyway, another great chapter! :) |
 Jenizaki 2009-03-03 . chapter 1I liked the idea of Cao Cao/Nu Wa in Orochi 2, and first let me say, great title; that's what lured me in. Heaven's Mandate is one of those cool, official, DW-age phrases that I always pick up on. =D
Heck, great story too! I love your Cao Cao; he's Cao Cao, but he's also more... I dunno, relatable. XD
And Nu Wa is GREAT; she's not the Ice Queen she is in Orochi (even though, she's Nu Wa, so she's badass either way) but she's still godly. She's more of a kindly goddess.
Anyway, great job! :) |
 NightShadow Blitz 2009-03-02 . chapter 5What can I say...
This is absolutely beautiful. A very nice piece of work and it deserves a lot.
:D
You got me captivated there the whole time. |
 MisterJB 2009-02-24 . chapter 3this is very well written. Nu Wa can be quite fun sometimes.
I'm sure that Cao Cao just went to the frontlines because he knew that Nu Wa was going to be his nurse XD |
 Meow 2009-02-21 . chapter 3 I don't usually comment on stuff but what u wrote was some of the best that i have read on this site. And i hope u write more especially about this pairing. |
 SilentNinja 2009-02-16 . chapter 1This has me wandering the symmetrics of Cao Cao's glorfication. Glad you're the one who doing a pairing I really wanted to read about. Cao Cao x Nu Wa. Nicely wrote and hard to read. |