that was a very good read ! loved it :D
the anding was funny ;P
“You’d best be careful. Spend the night on your back" lol
^^

Oh that was nice. It was an entire story in short form. It was just plain perfect. The hopping timeline worked really well with the storytelling, keeping us deeply involved in both the personal aspect of these characters and the overall plot. It is a very different format from most oneshots, but it is extremely lovely. This story has firmly settled this pairing as one of my most favorite for Bleach.
Very, very good work. I am in awe. :hands cookies:

Aw, I should have reviewed earlier but now I got around to it! Woo!

I adored this story. It was so ridiculously cute but dramatic and all around fantastic. You portrayed their characters extremely well! I love how adorable and passionate their relationship is. Honestly, there needs to be more ShuuKira fics. D: I just don't think they'll all live up to this kind of quality! :3

So congratulations on making such an amazing fic! I think I'll probably read it a hundred more times before I'm fully satisfied. :D

-Totschafe

Oh my gosh..You need a sequel to this, or something like it! This is brilliant! Love you, love your fics.

I wish I could put together a coherent response to this. Just... YES. I love your characterization for Kira (it's so rare for someone to do a really, really good Kira like this), and this is just... amazing. There were a lot of moments where I just cheered. Just... Yes. Thank you so, so much.