Ohmygosh I am such a complete idiot! I didn't read your author comment properly in your first fic about it not being by surrogacy. Sorry. So forget what I said about the reactions being different from the shows. And about the sequel, I didn't see your second chapter. Gosh I feel like an idiot.

But I really like this chapter, good work :)

YAY! More Shortland Street fiction! runs around in happy circles I'm a HUGE fan of Shortland Street so I am very happy that there are Shortland St fanfics here!

Your story was great. You should do a sequel, maybe into Hunter's reactions (like maybe make it different from how he reacted on the show?)...

You captured the characters really well, like I can actually imagine them saying it in real life (if that makes sense)

Anyway, would love to read some more Shortland Street fanfics from you.

Really nice chapter.

But you need to inprove on your grammar a bit. No offense.