|Reviews for Turbulence|
| sakurenjiDREamer 3/21/11 . chapter 1
I like how he changed his reaction to her gripping when he heard that she loved him! :D
| luvb00kw0rm 12/13/10 . chapter 1
i have that novel, it written by Sophie Kinsella, the same author who wrote Shopaholic series. anyway, it is a great fic, hiruma just being hiruma.. hehehe
| RiddleRaven 9/29/10 . chapter 1
lol. I like the idea of this. Mamori seemed to be freaking out a little TOO much, but the /idea/ of her freaking out at the turbulence and confessing things at every bump, with Hiruma right there to write them down... that's funny. That's really funny.
I liked this line though: ["Don't tease me Hiruma-kun. I seriously thought we were gonna die." She murmured.] It just sort of helped me take it more seriously or something.
Anyway, I really liked Hiruma's reactions. But he should've had more of a reaction to her confession, since it's in his perspective. I mean, seriously, what does he think of that?
| luvliness 5/6/10 . chapter 1
ya! it was so funny! I L.O.L.-ed at the part where Mamori-chan said she likes Hiiruma-kun! xD
| snowbells 3/26/10 . chapter 1
haha,so funny yet very cute!
| Llyhael Aquila 7/17/09 . chapter 1
cool fic! XD
i'm currently worshiping hiruma and his devilish, twisted personality, so yeah...
anyway, you're an indonesian?
akhirnya ketemu juga dg sesama author indonesia yg sering nulis pake english (tapi english-ku pas-pasan bgt...) ;)
yoroshiku, jill-san! XD
| BeTraYaL 6/6/09 . chapter 1
hehe, keep reviewing don't hurt you
Overall, great story..maybe you could replace "exited" with "excited"...
looking for another story from you though, write more please
| bengalzcat80 6/5/09 . chapter 1
waaw! funny and so romantic!
I'm laughing when Mamori said she is still virgin while she was totally scare to death. hahahahaha...
nice fanfic! good job!
| odou king 4/27/09 . chapter 1
hohoho, orang indo ya? hahaha, gak nyangka aja,, udah lama ga ke fanfic, dateng2 dah banyak orang indo-nya yang nulis,,
pake bahasa indo gpp kan? (bhs inggrisku kacau banget)
AKU JUGA PENGGEMAR HIRUMAMO!
seneng ya ngeliat mereka? aku suka banget ama pair ini, soalnya beda ama pair2 laen,,
ok, ok,, btt!
cerita yang ini bagus si, tapi ada keganjilan aja,, emang si mamori ga sadar dia ngomong gitu di depan hirumanya sendiri? yah, sisanya si ok2 aja menurutku (tapi aku ga bisa ngebayangin wajah hiruma pas meluk palanya mamori _
| Lady Light 4/8/09 . chapter 1
aw I love this pairing!
| pinchess07 3/23/09 . chapter 1
waah! so good!
| Strictler Reminder 3/2/09 . chapter 1
It's very nice; I like it. There are times when I feel uncomfortable while reading this but of course, that's just me. Nice job.
| Shinku Amakusa 3/1/09 . chapter 1
Yay! Another Fanfic!
Looks like I missed this one...
But still, I LOVE your FF very much!
I'm waiting for another fic!
| Ibby 2/19/09 . chapter 1
Cute bit of fluff. Yea, people on planes are always like "no cell phones at all, turn them off along with mp3 players, cd players, and other electronics" the fact is, if a cell phone could bring down a plane, the terrorists would have picked up on this already, so I can imagine Hiruma getting snippy with any flight attendant. And there is no way in hell Kurita fit in one seat along with Hiruma and Mamori. he would take up an entire row.
| Maped13 2/17/09 . chapter 1
YAHAHAHAHA! Cute story! How do you come up with these plots? About that book... Masi dijual kga d toko buku?