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Xai16
2009-11-20 . chapter 6
You guys are amazing. The Tsundere, the passion, the excelent grammar-that-you-don't-see-in-most-stories-so-it's-hard-to-read. That was an awesome story. My favorite part was the teacup. I actually thought she had lost it there until Tatsuki saw him too. That was EPIC! Or if I'm honest, I loved how responsive Ulquiorra was during their second love session. the imagery really turned me on. This is my first time reading one of you stories and I'm REALLY looking foward to reading more. Keep up the NERVE-WRACKINGLY-AWSOME work. I lurv ya. ;D
0.lumia.0
2009-11-12 . chapter 1
I love this story. I agree with the person before me, there were some kind of odd parts, but I think that the way you wrote this and the connection between Orihime and Ulquiorra really outruled any distractions.

Call me crazy, but I think if you wanted to continue off of this, it would be a great idea to show everything from Ulquiorra's side of the story. It's just a suggestion; I'm not begging you to make this, but I just thought it would be neat to see what Ulquiorra was doing behind the scenes sometimes. Like when Orihime took the bath; what was Ulquiorra doing out in the hallway? Were the others taunting him for having to take care of Orihime. I know there are some parts where it is from his point of view, but I just thought it'd be cool to have an alternate story from his point of view. Like I said, just a suggestion, and I would try it, but your writing style is so unique, I don't think I can!
Kathoskrino
2009-10-31 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story. The part that just had me hooked was the whole concept of stockholme syndrome developing into full blown affection to Orihime's captor. I wasn't really a fan of the ending because it felt thrown together. You seem to have just read the manga and decided to change things here and there to make this story plausible. I appreciate the attempt and believe you are very capable of achieving This. The only part of the story that made me uncomfortable was Ulquiorra and Orihime's first kiss. It was just honestly too silly for me to believe Ulquiorra would actually follow through. I do like, however, their gradually growing bond. My favorite thing about the whole story was Ulquiorra demanding to watch as she bathed. That was just priceless. You should really be proud of this work because it appeals to so many emotions. Great job and keep up the good work.
ItaSasu96
2009-10-30 . chapter 6
Whoo...Great story!
XImmyX
2009-10-20 . chapter 5
please write more soon. I think i cry easy because this story did make me cry haha :D write more soon!
Felling
2009-10-13 . chapter 6
That was beautiful... Great-job. Just pure amazing. :)
Felling
2009-10-13 . chapter 2
Omg, everyone plays the Nnotria card! But I love it!

Great-job here, I love this story. ~
Tieesha_Crayon
2009-10-12 . chapter 6
That...was beautiful. you should really think about making a sequel to this.
UlquiorraxOrihime
2009-10-06 . chapter 6
congratulations

this was teh first fan fic that ever got me to cry. the story was so touching. the way it was written is amazing. and the final outcome was mesmerizing. i hope you continue writing more ulquihime fan fics, because i love reading what u have to write.

PS
we are not weird cuz we like smut!! >:D
Moon Surfer
2009-10-05 . chapter 6
Nice coughcoughblush ending other than that the last part was really sweet how he belonged to her awesome! Radical Ulquihime hope ta see more!
Kiku ame
2009-10-05 . chapter 6
;.;

Happy endings!
blacktalon117
2009-10-02 . chapter 5
you made me cry. that means your story really grabbed me. Please tell me there is some sort of a happy ending here.
wutai flea
2009-09-19 . chapter 5
oh god i feel like crying now...its bad enough that Nnoitra died...that was just depressing, i like how Orihime learned it wasn't him...that god Aizen's dead whew...

next chapter's last right? poor hime...everyone she loves dies...*still hasn't forigven Kubo for killing off Ulqui...*
Eros ex Nihilo
2009-09-12 . chapter 5
oh god...i cried a little...please continue!
Eros ex Nihilo
2009-09-12 . chapter 4
oh, holy sexiness. that was pretty steamy...so i loved it is what i mean.
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