 askita 2009-10-11 . chapter 1I liked this alot. Very sweet and telling. She's more than those other girls. But sometimes she wishes she wasn't. Then she's reminded of why she is. Good stuff. |
 lithium17 2009-09-08 . chapter 1Loved this! |
 JingYee 2009-07-29 . chapter 1Love it. Great job again. :) |
 CatherineWinner 2009-07-24 . chapter 1This is so far the best Push fanfic I've ever read. This was just amazing!! Thanks so much for sharing it! |
 aikakone 2009-07-22 . chapter 1Great one. In my quick impression of things, our understanding of the characters and how they'd develop beyond the movie is the same.
One nitpick from this sentence: The girl whose pink and pallid is tossed back as you arch into his hands.
It doesn't quite make sense. Perhaps try "The girl who's pink and pallid, tossed back as you arch into his hands."
Same idea, just a better delivery.
Everything else seems flawless, which is why I only noticed that part. |
 LaPaige 2009-07-21 . chapter 1I love this. I've just finished watching Push, and this is the first fiction I've read from it, and I really liked this. You describe Cassie so well. She's my favourite character and I'm glad this was the first fic I read from Push :). |
 sparrowlight 2009-07-17 . chapter 1 omg! i love it! you wrote Cassie so well! |
 A Quiet Chaos 2009-07-12 . chapter 1Epic! I liked this a lot, and I think you should write more one-shots. |
 wlshygirl79 2009-03-17 . chapter 1bravo! Amazing...yes! |
 saicho-18 2009-03-02 . chapter 1I like it, I thought it was very effective. Even though there wasn't very much detail in the how of things, the feelings were very out there. :) |
 wrenbailey 2009-02-20 . chapter 1 nice job, haha |
 StudentofDust 2009-02-19 . chapter 1Damn, this was awesome... Seriously, excellent job! |
 Stratagem 2009-02-18 . chapter 1Awesome! Poetic, broken, repetitious and lovely! Very good twist at the end, showing how Cassie decides in the end that she likes who she is, and she doesn't want to be another one of those high school girls. They really would be shocked by her world. She shouldn't want to be one of them anyway; she has Nick. ^_~ Great piece! |
 Lucy 2009-02-16 . chapter 1 That was awesome. Cassie's such a strong girl, she deserves to have someone like Nick in her life. :) |
 glitterisblue 2009-02-16 . chapter 1 JENNY! LOVE IT! |