I like it

I Absolutely adore you LWD fics. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Wow, this was so good. I can't wait for more!
~Domi~

Oh man! Marti is definately the glue that holds the family together! How long has she been missing? Poor poor family! Sounds like a typical family in my town but still sad!
I'm addicted! Update soon!
~Crystal

loved it. almost as much as i liked code names for puberty. but thats not the point. please update soon. and, out of curiosity, are you going to put in any dasey or lizwin into this? please update soon

maschan

I like that Marti's mysterious disappearance has been a catalyst for the family falling apart. However, it seems like the cracks really began with Nora's miscarriage, which was a nice detail. I look forward to the next chapter.

New Chapter!
Hurry up please :)!

I'm really liking this. It's interesting how each character is reacting in a way that initially seems completely OOC, but makes sense when considering what's happened (Lizzie, for example). Really good job, and please update soon!
-Rhapsody

Hurry n update...

Finally! I remember watching that video a while ago and wondering if anybody was going to write a companion fic. I can't wait to read your take on Roswellalien's trailer- what you have so far is really interesting.

Please update soon!

UPDATE PLEASE!
Like VERY Soon.

I really loved this. And I adores seeing Marti's innocence, but liked the fact that she also knew when something was wrong (a little late, but still).

I'm curious as to how this story will turn out and what actually happened to Marti.

~ Ally

Whoa! way to scare me! I really hope that Marti will be okay!

Nice, but how did they put her to sleep, and what's that trailer you got this from about?

I'm happy you went with the Marti disappears angle! I'm very intrigued! I'm happy you're the one who is writing this. I know you'll make it great!

I know you wanted to write this so is it appropriate to say thanks for turning my video into a fanfic?! haha. Whatever. THANK YOU!